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PostSubject: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:18 pm


yeah um there's transparency issues but other than that feel free to rate and critique!
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:20 pm

You draw really nice! I really love the effects for the dress. it really matches the colors. Very Happy Although, I think the head is a bit too small.
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:21 pm

I have no idea how you did that but its amazing nuff said <3
Hehe I have some critique, just a little though.! This is probably just me but I think her head should be a tiny bit bigger?
Anyways I say 10/10 because I cant do anything even close to this good
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:22 pm

I think the head is a bit too small too, but I love everything else! You draw so well:)
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:22 pm

gjhdskhjd thank you!!!

the small head thing is really makign me mad oh man like this head isn't that small!?!?!?! it's not like it's anime oh man
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:33 pm

I don't think it's that the head is small, but the shoulders aren't...."wide??" enough? :k

I really like your style, but something about the arm to /her/ right bothers me? I'm not sure how to explain.
Anyway, 9.5/10.
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:43 pm

yeah, it bothered me too. u__u but thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 7:53 pm

This is really cool! ANd pretty.
It's really good. 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:03 pm

sghjklshdjf thank you so much!
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 8:44 pm

Yay! You completed it! The dress graphics are awesome!
10/10
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:06 pm

Mutie wrote:

the small head thing is really makign me mad oh man like this head isn't that small!?!?!?! it's not like it's anime oh man

HAHA UM...
Learn to take critique im sorry. like this'll probably sound really rude but her head actually DOES look too small. the thing is, and this is CONSISTENT in your work, you draw bodies way too big and way too long. it ends up looking very, very unnatural. so yes, the head should be a little bigger, but not too big. or the body should be smaller. the hair also lacks volume and looks unnatural.
ALSO, you suffer from same face syndrome, which means you have basically no variety in the way you draw faces. all look the same.
HOWEVER!! i do love her facial expression and the dress effect is very very pretty.

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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 9:56 pm

i'm so rry??? like i appreciate the critiques, and i understand my issues of my art. i just getREALLY sick of constant critique on the same things over and over even though they should be fixed. i wouldn't mind a friendly reminder, in fact that'd be great! but it's literally almost all i get for critiques.
i don't even know. sorry.
and thanks for the rest of your critique. uwu
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:27 pm

well, if you get a critique consistently it means it definitely needs to be fixed, and instead of complaining about it, you should work on, well, fixing it! your style is very unique and has a lottt of potential, so don't whine and say its perfect, try to fix them!!
you're welcome uvu

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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:43 pm

Everything is nice except for the proportions... But you don't wan to hear a broken record right now so I'll leave it at that uvu

Nice dress though c:
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:44 pm

Wow, this is so beautiful. I love the dress patterns.
You could make a head a little bigger but this is wonderful.
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sat Mar 09, 2013 10:59 pm

@oliver sdhkjsd yeah i'm trying to fix it, even though the improvement is going slowly. and i'm not saying it's perfect, sorry if it intended that way! thanks though uwu

@relora y eah i need to work on anatomy, but thanks!

@minami thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: arrt!    Sun Mar 10, 2013 12:38 am

actually i'm not going to critique your head/body/face whatever because personally, i don't mind bad anatomy (though i'm not saying your anatomy sucks!!). the important thing is that you're proud of what you did and continue to improve in it! i love the galaxy effect on the dress, though i don't know how i feel about neon outlines.
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