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evan
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PostSubject: Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT)   Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 13, 2013 3:39 pm

Someone sticky this. It's a thread!


So yeah I think Imma writer!
Maybe....BOOOOOO
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Timeline Eight:

The Encountering of Charlotte Stratstone:

Puella Magi of America:

Chains (told in the first-person of Emaka:



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PostSubject: Re: Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT)   Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT) Icon_minitimeFri Mar 15, 2013 5:56 pm

That's really cute! May I request a story about how Madoka and Homura found Charlotte?
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PostSubject: Re: Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT)   Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 16, 2013 12:00 am

Okay!!!

I'm not done with Timeline Eight, but I am writing another chapter!

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PostSubject: Re: Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT)   Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 16, 2013 12:09 am

I really like your writing. I suggest that you work more on writing; you should take more time to add details so that you really set a mood.
EXAMPLE:

1: I watch as the sun sets behind the ocean.
2: I watch as the glowing sun sets behind the vast, beautiful ocean.

The mood trying to be set is beauty; or peacefulness.
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PostSubject: Re: Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT)   Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 16, 2013 8:51 pm

Updated the stories, just in case you haven't already seen!!

I added how they met Charlotte, and the last section of PMMM 8th Timeline!
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PostSubject: Re: Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT)   Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT) Icon_minitimeSat Mar 16, 2013 8:52 pm

These are very good! I'm feeling lazy so I'll add critiques later.
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PostSubject: Re: Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT)   Madoka's Literature Thread (WUT) Icon_minitimeSun Apr 21, 2013 10:44 am

Updated with two new stories!
One is a theory stry, and one is about my OC contracting.
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