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PostSubject: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:33 am




the first one is an art trade i did with abbey, and the second one is a gift for a friend of mine. uwu
i know their expressions and poses are highly similiar, and i promise that my next drawing won't be like either of them. although hopefully the heads aren't too small for the bodies and the faces don't look similiar even though the expressions do!
feel free to rate and critique aside from the similiar poses/expressions. uwu
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 6:06 am

SOOOOOOOO CUTE!

I love both of them!

9/10 for both!
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 6:07 am

I love your art it is epic.

9.8/10 for the one on top, 9.9/10 for the one on the bottom.
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 12:21 pm

sfhjlkd thank you a ton!! uwu
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 12:23 pm

I love the first one's hair. 10/10 for the first, 9.8/10 for the second.
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 1:03 pm

thank you! any critiques??? u__u
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:40 pm

your proportions are kinda messed up! abbeys boobs are waaay too far low, even if they were saggy, they wouldnt start there. if you moved her boobs up, the rest of the body would also have to go up. however, your proportions are improving, which is really nice Surprised
i still want you to try more variety! not in your poses and expressions (im guilty of doing the looking left 3/4 standing up haha) but like, the way the face and the body looks? eye type and nose type and stuff like that, and where the curves are and how skinny/fat the person is. for example:
fma:
 
himoru arakawa, the artist of this series, has very unique features in each of her characters, im using the homonculus as an example! the little kid has a lot rounder of a face than the fat guy and even the guy with the eyepatch and the guy next to him have different face shapes and noses.

when going for more simple styles, sometimes you have to have a bit less variety? i
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here the only noticeable difference is the nose and sometimes the eyes, and thats only if youre looking. however, you can still tell them apart due to their clothing and stuff, but thats because the artist has to draw fast and it looks appealing!
in simple styles you can also have a lot of variety, dont get me wrong
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they have reaaally really obvious differences, and its not just the age. keep looking up powerpuff characters if you want to see what im talking about.

however, your style is kinda complex, so i would try to go for variety, right now.
youre definitely improving, though! your proportions are getting better and so are your faces. your style is super unique im jealous ugghhh

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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 5:26 pm

hjklfskhdj thank you a ton oliver! i will look into proportions and variety more, for sure. uwu
any other critiques??
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 5:50 pm

I actually kind of agree with Oliver. Now that I think of it, the boobies are low.

Not to be rude, also the necks kind of long too.

BUT THIS IS AWESOME.
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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sat Mar 30, 2013 7:42 pm

^^hadnt noticed, but yeh, the neck is too long

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PostSubject: Re: some art   Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:18 pm

ye ah necks really suck oh
but again thank you!!
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