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Squirtle
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PostSubject: Did I improve?   Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:50 pm

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I think I improved on digital drawing a lot from before. Rate and critique please!
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PostSubject: Re: Did I improve?   Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:03 pm

You totally did!

Critique: The shading is everywhere; Very Messy. The head is a bit awkward.

Other than that, It's nice!

Rating: 7.9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Did I improve?   Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:09 pm

You did, but the head is a bit off...

Great job though. 8.5
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PostSubject: Re: Did I improve?   Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:09 pm

Your shading improved a ton! But that anatomy is still a bit off.
You did improve though!
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PostSubject: Re: Did I improve?   Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:14 pm

Wow! You did improve! 8/10 Here are my only crits

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PostSubject: Re: Did I improve?   Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:46 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Did I improve?   Mon Apr 08, 2013 7:50 pm

Yes you improved!

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In my opinion, the newer version of this drawing deserves a 8.3/10.
Keep on drawing! Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Did I improve?   Tue Apr 09, 2013 9:25 am

the anatomy looks way better! i have no critique, since everyone else covered it all. good job!
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