( I would have posted this in my literature thread, But I wasn't sure if I'm allowed to bump or not?))
Anyway, Here's chapter one.
Should I finish? Also, the man who did that to Mary ISN'T the Flower Killer. You'll find out who soon enough.
Update: Here's Chapter 2!
GASP! Well, what do you guys think? Should I make Chapter 3? Tell me!