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PostSubject: The Flower Killer. ( Story by Flower.)   Sun May 19, 2013 11:40 pm

( I would have posted this in my literature thread, But I wasn't sure if I'm allowed to bump or not?))

Anyway, Here's chapter one.

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Should I finish? Also, the man who did that to Mary ISN'T the Flower Killer. You'll find out who soon enough.

Update: Here's Chapter 2!
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GASP! Well, what do you guys think? Should I make Chapter 3? Tell me!


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PostSubject: Re: The Flower Killer. ( Story by Flower.)   Sun May 19, 2013 11:50 pm

Ooh this is really interesting so far, keep up the good work!
Well it would be nice if you develop Mary's character a little bit more, since it starts with her being all revengeful and stuff. Maybe add a backstory?
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PostSubject: Re: The Flower Killer. ( Story by Flower.)   Sun May 19, 2013 11:52 pm

Witch wrote:
Ooh this is really interesting so far, keep up the good work!
Well it would be nice if you develop Mary's character a little bit more, since it starts with her being all revengeful and stuff. Maybe add a backstory?


This is just the introduction. You'll learn more about Mary more on in the story; You'll learn why she's exactly revengeful; Other than the fact on what happened to her.
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PostSubject: Re: The Flower Killer. ( Story by Flower.)   Mon May 20, 2013 12:13 am

Yes, continue. I like where this is going.
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PostSubject: Re: The Flower Killer. ( Story by Flower.)   Mon May 20, 2013 6:50 pm

@Joy Glad you like it!

I updated it with Chapter 2. c:
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PostSubject: Re: The Flower Killer. ( Story by Flower.)   Mon May 20, 2013 6:54 pm

Chapter 3 please! Wow, that went by fast. What did she do with the screwdriver?
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PostSubject: Re: The Flower Killer. ( Story by Flower.)   Mon May 20, 2013 7:01 pm

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Chapter 3 please! Wow, that went by fast. What did she do with the screwdriver?
I'll do it soon. She left it in the woman's head.
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