Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.


Fantage Cheats, Secrets, Glitches, Info & Help.
 
HomeFAQSearchMemberlistRegisterLog inUsergroups


Share | 
 

 [Insert Identity Here] = A Story

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
Go to page : 1, 2, 3, 4, 5  Next
AuthorMessage
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:25 pm

About the Story:
Spoiler:
 

Prologue:
Spoiler:
 

Chapter One: The Knock on the Door
{Neutral POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Two: The Bus Station
{Neutral POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Three: More Than Your Worthless Non Self Could Ever Dream to Be
{Neutral POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Four: Lost With No Hope
{Neutral POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Five: The Shouting People
{Neutral POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Six: An Unusual Discovery
{A New Character's POV!}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Seven: Like a Pink-Haired Angel
{Neutral POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Eight: Please Press 2...
{Neutral POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Nine: What'd They Say?
{Miss LeMarre's POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Ten: Leftover Shards of a Broken Person
{Miss LeMarre's POV}
Spoiler:
 

Chapter Eleven: Empty Molds
{Miss LeMarre's POV}
Spoiler:
 

Flaming is Forbidden
Complaints are Accepted
Compliments are Welcome
Critiques are Highly Encouraged


Last edited by Nakira on Fri Nov 26, 2010 3:13 pm; edited 19 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:31 pm

(sorry for double posting, the editing's messed up) For some reason the story isn't showing up. Help please??
Back to top Go down
View user profile
v
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 9586
Join date : 2010-02-07
Age : 16
Location : i'm always watching

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:42 pm

Did you write it on Microsoft Word or something first?

_________________

tumblr
let's catch up.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:45 pm

miyeon wrote:
Did you write it on Microsoft Word or something first?
No, I just typed it up on here. (Luckily I copied it.)
Back to top Go down
View user profile
v
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 9586
Join date : 2010-02-07
Age : 16
Location : i'm always watching

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:47 pm

Nakira wrote:
miyeon wrote:
Did you write it on Microsoft Word or something first?
No, I just typed it up on here. (Luckily I copied it.)

Did you try to paste it again?

_________________

tumblr
let's catch up.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:47 pm

miyeon wrote:
Nakira wrote:
miyeon wrote:
Did you write it on Microsoft Word or something first?
No, I just typed it up on here. (Luckily I copied it.)

Did you try to paste it again?

Yes, a few times.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
v
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 9586
Join date : 2010-02-07
Age : 16
Location : i'm always watching

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:48 pm

Nakira wrote:
miyeon wrote:
Nakira wrote:
miyeon wrote:
Did you write it on Microsoft Word or something first?
No, I just typed it up on here. (Luckily I copied it.)

Did you try to paste it again?

Yes, a few times.

And it didn't show up?

I would type it on microsoft word first, then post it up.

_________________

tumblr
let's catch up.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 10:50 pm

I'm on a Mac, so I can't do it.


Oh God this is so embarrassing. D:

EDIT: I fixed it! THANK YOU SO MUCH! Very Happy
Back to top Go down
View user profile
v
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 9586
Join date : 2010-02-07
Age : 16
Location : i'm always watching

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:41 pm

Ooh, I like the prologue~!

Can't wait for more! ;D

_________________

tumblr
let's catch up.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
FreedoM 4EVA
Loyal Fantagian


Posts : 1680
Join date : 2010-06-18
Age : 19
Location : Earth

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:23 am

I really luved the story!!!
Looking forward for more!!! Very Happy
Back to top Go down
View user profile
pokeranger
Hero Fantagian


Posts : 5449
Join date : 2010-01-29
Location : Loading...

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:26 am

Nice prologue! Although, i really like action taking place... Nice beginning though!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Wed Jul 14, 2010 11:54 am

Thanks for the comments, I promise there will be more action. ^.^ I went through a lot of trouble to post this, so I really appreciate your support, everyone. [: Now excuse me while I write a new chappy... *ω*
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Bloobu
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1100
Join date : 2010-06-05
Age : 17

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:02 pm

:O i loved it Very Happy u shud really write more and fast ^^ ur fans are beginning to get impatient XD lololol
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kandi
Passionate Fantagian


Posts : 852
Join date : 2010-03-03
Age : 18

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Wed Jul 14, 2010 12:02 pm

Awesome story! More plz xD
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Wed Jul 14, 2010 1:03 pm

SjeeshBack wrote:
Awesome story! More plz xD

@sj and @bloobunny Thank! I hope to post on chapter each weekday. I just posted Chapter 1.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kandi
Passionate Fantagian


Posts : 852
Join date : 2010-03-03
Age : 18

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Wed Jul 14, 2010 3:43 pm

Can't wait for more! Very Happy
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Thu Jul 15, 2010 11:37 pm

Thank you. The next chapter is up. Also, I have a request:
If you know anyone on the forum who does constructive critism, can you please have them critique my story? I want to know how I can improve. Thanks! ^.^

EDIT: Should I post every other day or only on weekdays?
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kandi
Passionate Fantagian


Posts : 852
Join date : 2010-03-03
Age : 18

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Fri Jul 16, 2010 4:12 pm

on weekdays... MUST HAVE MOAR
Back to top Go down
View user profile
v
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 9586
Join date : 2010-02-07
Age : 16
Location : i'm always watching

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Fri Jul 16, 2010 5:16 pm

I want more~!

This story is goin' great! x3

_________________

tumblr
let's catch up.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Fri Jul 23, 2010 12:42 pm

I'm sorry I haven't posted in forever. I'm going to start posting on a more regular basis from now on. And to apologize for not posting all week, I'm going to post a chapter on the weekend, too. Again, sorry. I just posted Chapter Three.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Makkine
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 2772
Join date : 2010-05-17
Age : 19
Location : Woah

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:10 pm

YES. I LOVE the world building, character's, mood, everything. CONTRAGUTULATIONS!

Constructive critisis m? Hm..... I guess you need less similes, they are giving me a headache. Apart from that, nothing. I love it!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Fri Jul 23, 2010 1:22 pm

IluvJB36 wrote:
YES. I LOVE the world building, character's, mood, everything. CONTRAGUTULATIONS!

Constructive critisis m? Hm..... I guess you need less similes, they are giving me a headache. Apart from that, nothing. I love it!

Wow, thanks! Ok, I'll try to use less similes, I know how purple prose can be. XD I've been waiting for some critique, so thank you. I've read I tiny bit of your story, and I think you're an amazing author, so it's quite a compliment for me. ^.^
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kandi
Passionate Fantagian


Posts : 852
Join date : 2010-03-03
Age : 18

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:56 pm

This story is one of the best I've read on the site so far. Smile
Back to top Go down
View user profile
case1998
Senior Fantagian


Posts : 459
Join date : 2010-05-22
Age : 18
Location : In a AI storage unit.

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:51 am

This is a great story! You did awesome on it!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Nakira
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1137
Join date : 2010-07-12
Age : 20
Location : the groan zone

PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:33 pm

Thanks so much guys. I really appreciate the support. Am I allowed to post a link to this story in my signature?

Also, Chapter Four has been posted.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story   Today at 5:19 pm

Back to top Go down
 
[Insert Identity Here] = A Story
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 5Go to page : 1, 2, 3, 4, 5  Next
 Similar topics
-
» Toy Story LEGO + MATTEL WWE
» Is death essential to good story writing?
» Campaign Story Challenge : ERA, "The Mass" Story
» Thinkaway's "Collectors" Toy Story Figures
» Possible story idea

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Fantage Forum :: Fantage :: Fantage Creations-
Jump to: