Song I Wrote ~Wish~

Life isn't what it's made out to be.
No, no, no, nothing is what it seems.
There are ups and downs
and turn around-s,
You'll fall, you'll cry,
You'll wonder why.
You'll laugh you'll smile,
It'll be nice... for a while.
Then everything changes.
And it wont make sense all of the time,
but everything happens for a reason... right?
You just gotta hold on,
Stand your ground.
Even if you feel like dying
Just keep trying.
You can win this fight,
just don't let the darkness
Keep you from finding the light.
Forget the bad,
Remember the good.
Dreams will overcome the nightmares
If you listen to my words.
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I didn't finish it yet. Obviously =3=
But yeah that should be most of it.
Please give any rates, critiques, advice etc. that you can!
Thanks.

This is like freaking heaven!You should make one about Annalee <33 Gah that would be adorable!

This is amazing! You should make a youtube video with your voice, it would be great to hear you sing it!

These are pretty good song lyrics, but you should come up with a tune for it.

That is so awsome maybe you can trun it into a big hit keep up the great work

It's nice, but it's like one of those songs everyone's heard before. (Not trying to be rude, obviously, you did a great job.)