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Kennedy
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PostSubject: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 4:01 pm

Something I drew. Its not all that. Critque please.

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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 4:08 pm

This is really cute! One critique I didn't have to think through is her legs. They're good starting, but as they go down they look a bit too skinny. FOR ME, anyways. Anyone else might have said something else.

Over-all, I really like the style and you're great at colouring!

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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 4:36 pm

Ocean wrote:
This is really cute! One critique I didn't have to think through is her legs. They're good starting, but as they go down they look a bit too skinny. FOR ME, anyways. Anyone else might have said something else.

Over-all, I really like the style and you're great at colouring!

Over-all Rate: 8.9/10

Thank you! And, I do agree. I could've made the legs have a little more drawing Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 5:46 pm

Oh my gosh that is gorgeous I really like the concept! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 5:46 pm

these chains are beautiful too omg
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 6:01 pm

@Witch, thanks! I like to have a plot for my drawings.

@Ocean, thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 6:02 pm

Ooh this is so cute<3
What did you use (like crayons, pens, markers, etc.)?
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 6:06 pm

Wish wrote:
Ooh this is so cute<3
What did you use (like crayons, pens, markers, etc.)?

Crayons. I sketched first. I'm going to use watercolor pens next.
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 6:09 pm

can i have your talent

make deviant art pls if u don't have one
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 8:51 pm

I really don't care for dA. I just like to draw and post it here. Maybe in the future.
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 8:53 pm

This is great, I love your shading skills!
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Mon May 27, 2013 8:55 pm

Woah! This is really nice! I really love how you shade it :3
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Tue May 28, 2013 1:37 am

the colors go really well and this is overall very pretty! the hands look funny, but then again hands are super hard for everyone. just out of curiosity, where did you get the idea for this? 7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Tue May 28, 2013 7:22 am

hop wrote:
the colors go really well and this is overall very pretty! the hands look funny, but then again hands are super hard for everyone. just out of curiosity, where did you get the idea for this? 7.5/10

Thank you, Hop! I just drew it for the people who wants to do something but is feeling like theres something between their way but the have to keep trying to get out. Derp Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Tue May 28, 2013 7:39 am

This is really cool. My problem is that to be chained up, it implies that you're somehow locked onto the chain, whereas she's holding it loosely in her hand.

But it's still good enough for a 9.7/10
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PostSubject: Re: Chained up.   Tue May 28, 2013 7:40 am

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Thank you and I'll take a look at that c:
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