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PostSubject: How i reformed Discord   Tue Jun 04, 2013 8:51 pm

Discord: Chaos CHAOS EVERYWHERE!
Me: Not so fast!
Discord:-stares-
Me: SAY SORRY!
Discord: Your the most beautiful creature ever
Celesita: Give me a break....
Discord: Will you turn me into stone?
Me:-does ccy face- hmm maybe
Discord:-in love-



One month later

Discord: Better not wake her up..
Discord: -whispers good morning- -kiss-
Me: -wakes up shocked- YOU WON'T DO THAT OR ELSE-
Discord: Fineee



One year later

Discord:Mwhahhahaha
Me:Again chaos? Oh well..
Discord:-evil laugh- of why isn't it the ugly little Cindy.....
Me: I'M NOT UGLY NOR LITTLE one time...
Discord: I DON'T WANT TO HEAR YOUR UGLY LITTLE STORIES!
Me: -does horn spell-
Discord:GET ME OUT!
Me: hehe never....
Discord:HELP ME CHRYSALIS!
Chrysalis: I'm not evil anymore see I don't have my holes!
Discord:-sighs-
Me:-does break spell-
Discord: I guess when your friends you don't have ur own way
Me:Come on say it!
Discord:Friendship is magic!

Pinkie Pie:WAITTT A MINUTE! KISS KISS KISS!

The end!
(Ingore pinkie pie)


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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Tue Jun 04, 2013 9:26 pm

Its interesting abd a cute story
I don't think that Discord can be returned, I mean he's made up out of chaos but it's a nice fan fic
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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 5:03 am

You didn't "reform" Discord in this story. You just screamed at him for a while and then he just gave up without reason instead of being in character and killing you.

Isn't Discord like, 1000+ years old? And you're not even 10? That's kind of creepy if you think about it.
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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 8:05 am

Jeff wrote:
You didn't "reform" Discord in this story. You just screamed at him for a while and then he just gave up without reason instead of being in character and killing you.

Isn't Discord like, 1000+ years old? And you're not even 10? That's kind of creepy if you think about it.
Oh no I have a made up pony that's as old as Celestia but with brown hair and im way powerful than her and my cutie mark is elements of harmony,so that means I'm the element princess
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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 8:55 am

Princess Cindy wrote:
Jeff wrote:
You didn't "reform" Discord in this story. You just screamed at him for a while and then he just gave up without reason instead of being in character and killing you.

Isn't Discord like, 1000+ years old? And you're not even 10? That's kind of creepy if you think about it.
Oh no I have a made up pony that's as old as Celestia but with brown hair and im way powerful than her and my cutie mark is elements of harmony,so that means I'm the element princess

That's called a Mary Sue, my friend. She directly contradicts canon (Celestia is the most powerful pony, the elements of Harmony are embodied by the mane 6...etc).

Also, she's a self-insert. You use first person pronouns to describe her, and she's dating who I can only assume is your favourite character.

I don't mean to be blunt, but this pony OC of yours is in dire need of some character development.
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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 10:34 am

Ron She Is Literally Nine

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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 12:55 pm

Jeff wrote:
Princess Cindy wrote:
Jeff wrote:
You didn't "reform" Discord in this story. You just screamed at him for a while and then he just gave up without reason instead of being in character and killing you.

Isn't Discord like, 1000+ years old? And you're not even 10? That's kind of creepy if you think about it.
Oh no I have a made up pony that's as old as Celestia but with brown hair and im way powerful than her and my cutie mark is elements of harmony,so that means I'm the element princess

That's called a Mary Sue, my friend. She directly contradicts canon (Celestia is the most powerful pony, the elements of Harmony are embodied by the mane 6...etc).

Also, she's a self-insert. You use first person pronouns to describe her, and she's dating who I can only assume is your favourite character.

I don't mean to be blunt, but this pony OC of yours is in dire need of some character development.
............. okay??? But I made it for rps on chats and stuff not for stuff like let's say with my pony toys and I just write fan fic stories for fun because I feel like it I don't mean to be rude so yea.. I know celestia is powerful I made Princess Cindy for fun Smile
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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 4:11 pm

I applaud you Cindy<3. You are being sweet and kind in the face of a tough critique. I personally think you deserve the elements of harmony cutie mark for not going crazy and yelling at Jeff.
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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 4:25 pm

Jeff wrote:
Princess Cindy wrote:
Jeff wrote:
You didn't "reform" Discord in this story. You just screamed at him for a while and then he just gave up without reason instead of being in character and killing you.

Isn't Discord like, 1000+ years old? And you're not even 10? That's kind of creepy if you think about it.
Oh no I have a made up pony that's as old as Celestia but with brown hair and im way powerful than her and my cutie mark is elements of harmony,so that means I'm the element princess

That's called a Mary Sue, my friend. She directly contradicts canon (Celestia is the most powerful pony, the elements of Harmony are embodied by the mane 6...etc).

Also, she's a self-insert. You use first person pronouns to describe her, and she's dating who I can only assume is your favourite character.

I don't mean to be blunt, but this pony OC of yours is in dire need of some character development.

Don't take any offense but let her dream she is nine. Hey when I was nine I made a story about how my two mice explored the world.

Also Cindy this is a very good story. Though it would be cool if you liked zapped discord with some kind of power that would make him foret about the evil in him. But you don't need to take any of my advice. This is an adorable story though. Good Jon :3
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PostSubject: Re: How i reformed Discord   Wed Jun 05, 2013 5:14 pm

Moka wrote:
Jeff wrote:
Princess Cindy wrote:
Jeff wrote:
You didn't "reform" Discord in this story. You just screamed at him for a while and then he just gave up without reason instead of being in character and killing you.

Isn't Discord like, 1000+ years old? And you're not even 10? That's kind of creepy if you think about it.
Oh no I have a made up pony that's as old as Celestia but with brown hair and im way powerful than her and my cutie mark is elements of harmony,so that means I'm the element princess

That's called a Mary Sue, my friend. She directly contradicts canon (Celestia is the most powerful pony, the elements of Harmony are embodied by the mane 6...etc).

Also, she's a self-insert. You use first person pronouns to describe her, and she's dating who I can only assume is your favourite character.

I don't mean to be blunt, but this pony OC of yours is in dire need of some character development.

Don't take any offense but let her dream she is nine. Hey when I was nine I made a story about how my two mice explored the world.

Also Cindy this is a very good story. Though it would be cool if you liked zapped discord with some kind of power that would make him foret about the evil in him. But you don't need to take any of my advice. This is an adorable story though. Good Jon :3
Aww two mice? Cute! Thank you guys!
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