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sherley739
Passionate Fantagian
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| Subject: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired)  Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:33 pm | |
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CRITIQUES PLEASE~ need to fix mistakes before i begin painting and inking it all in . thank you ! (sorry for large pic)
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flower
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482
Join date : 2012-12-20
Age : 22
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:35 pm | |
| Can you put this in a spoiler, please? | |
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sherley739
Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 757
Join date : 2011-07-23
Age : 25
Location : district 12, panem
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:36 pm | |
| - Galaxy wrote:
- Can you put this in a spoiler, please?
you know, i would, if only i remembered how to. | |
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aimi
Veteran Fantagian
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Join date : 2012-09-02
Age : 23
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| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 6:44 pm | |
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flower
Hero Fantagian
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Join date : 2012-12-20
Age : 22
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:22 pm | |
| - sherley739 wrote:
- Galaxy wrote:
- Can you put this in a spoiler, please?
you know, i would, if only i remembered how to. This is the code: - Code:
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[spoiler]YOUR PHOTO LINK HERE[/spoiler] | |
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Lenka
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| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:29 pm | |
| this is absolutely beautiful! no critiques! | |
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flower
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482
Join date : 2012-12-20
Age : 22
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:30 pm | |
| Now that I look at it, This is a beautiful drawing. Really, beautiful. 9.8/10. | |
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Snow
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Join date : 2012-08-21
Age : 21
Location : Forever young
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 7:47 pm | |
| 10/10
I love it! Its perfect! | |
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Link
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1248
Join date : 2011-08-27
Location : in hell
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:15 pm | |
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Lenka
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| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:16 pm | |
| ok I have one critique: add color! | |
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sherley739
Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 757
Join date : 2011-07-23
Age : 25
Location : district 12, panem
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:38 pm | |
| - Lenka wrote:
- ok I have one critique: add color!
im going to. i was just asking if i should fix anything before doing that, because once i add color its too late. | |
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Daisy
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3369
Join date : 2011-12-22
Age : 23
Location : In Hell, With Sebastian..
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 8:44 pm | |
| It's really beautiful I will give it 9/10 :>
I mean, I could not give it a perfect score because I just could feel it.
I don't know what's the mistake or missing of it but I could only give a score sorry. | |
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sherley739
Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 757
Join date : 2011-07-23
Age : 25
Location : district 12, panem
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 10:16 pm | |
| - Xerxes Break wrote:
- It's really beautiful I will give it 9/10 :>
I mean, I could not give it a perfect score because I just could feel it.
I don't know what's the mistake or missing of it but I could only give a score sorry. that's fine, i actually think its the hair. it took me a while to notice but it seems to large for her head. | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Thu Jun 13, 2013 11:02 pm | |
| Oh this is really lovely! Nice work! c: |
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Noasauru
Rookie Fantagian
Posts : 45
Join date : 2013-02-04
Location : Under your bed
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Fri Jun 14, 2013 9:49 am | |
| I absolutely loove this!
Now the only thing that's sort of bugging me is the size of the lips.
Maybe it's because the nose a tiny bit too big.
But the lips look a teeny bit too small.
If you make them bigger by juust a little bit.
I think it'll look a lot better.
But overall I think this is soo perfect! C:
Amazing job! | |
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Takeshi
Dedicated Fantagian
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Join date : 2013-05-20
Location : Death
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:07 am | |
| I think its the hair. :O awesome elf dude!!! Face proportion is so nicely done,and its very accurate, example , the eyes are in the perfect places, its not like one eye is up on the forehead and the other one is on the cheek!XD ...Nose could be shorter however, thats just because i dont like lonnnnggg noses.
8/10
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YEEZUS
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| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Fri Jun 14, 2013 11:09 am | |
| Holy crap this is perfect.
10/10 | |
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Beauty Guru
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Age : 21
Location : I put my hand gently into the calm water. It seemed as if it was healing me. Everyone saw me. I took my hand out of the water and I knew at that very moment, I was the son of Posideon.
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Fri Jun 14, 2013 12:16 pm | |
| OMIGOSH! This is epic! SELL YOUR ART NOW!!!! | |
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Rena
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 153
Join date : 2013-06-12
Age : 26
Location : at home being lazy
| | Subject: Re: elf girl WIP (lord of the rings inspired) Fri Jun 14, 2013 1:33 pm | |
| Wow, this is really good! ^^
I give it a 9.5/10 c: | |
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