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Colorora
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PostSubject: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:35 pm

so i made this fantage edit and it's supposed to look like me
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feel free to rate and critique.
P.S updated! took jeff's suggestion


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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Fri Oct 18, 2013 5:46 pm

This is pretty good, but I feel like she should have hair on the right side of her head, unless it's shaved. Also, shading would be nice.

6/10
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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Fri Oct 18, 2013 7:57 pm

it looks a little better with the shading

good try 6/10
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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Fri Oct 18, 2013 8:03 pm

I think it's ok 5.6/10

Here is a crit:

First off with the hair, to make it neater draw it out with the pencil tool then erase the big line art until it is the smallest it can be ( sorry if u don't understand this I am on my iPad so can't use pictures). Also with the shading try to use at least 6 colors instead of 2 and don't pillow shade or just scribble or out them around..make it neat. Same thing goes with your shirt, pants,and shoes only of you are doing pant, shirt, a d shoes use less colors like at least 3 colors. Also remember dont use 18 different shades of a color or else it will look weird!!
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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Fri Oct 18, 2013 9:21 pm

the lines are messy and like what everyone said, you should have shaded it.

6.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Sat Oct 19, 2013 2:16 am

I think you should have shaded it more, but 7/10!
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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Sat Oct 19, 2013 2:26 am

I think 6/10
It is good but not enough the hair looks a bit lumpy I'm not a pro at Art but....as everyone else said you could have done a bit more shading
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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Sat Oct 19, 2013 6:57 am

it was done in paint because i dont want to buy a big pro editing program but ill try and look up tutorials.
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PostSubject: Re: wow... I did really good. ( fantage edit )   Sat Oct 19, 2013 7:28 am

u don't need to buy a big pro editing program just go on youtube and search up "free photoshop" like do u rly think ppl pay for these things no they don't
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