Posts : 229
Join date : 2012-08-02
Age : 17
Location : london
|Subject: a story with no name Thu Oct 31, 2013 4:48 pm|| |
so i just wrote the beginning paragraphs for my story.
it's going to be set in the united states and my knowledge of the u.s education system and language and stuff is really limited so please help me with that stuff
this does contain swearing and later on, will contain drug and alcohol use and some "raunchy" scenes (if i don't cringe out of writing them):
i know this is absolutely TERRIBLE but the purpose of this is so i can get a vague outline of what the story will open with ok so this is the first draft that i randomly wrote in five minutes.
Posts : 4705
Join date : 2012-08-28
Age : 17
Location : The dark kingdom and it's shadows.
|Subject: Re: a story with no name Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:57 pm|| |
oh wow this is actually a great plot so far i can't wait till this gets made
Posts : 360
Join date : 2013-12-08
Age : 20
Location : Ukraine, K***-ken, K***-shi, ***-ku, ***-chome, 2-3-1
|Subject: Re: a story with no name Thu Dec 19, 2013 7:52 am|| |
That's very terrible plot =.= However, it might be a perfect starting for a fairy tale about some positive supernatural creatures trying to save you - like in Chronicles of Narnia (at the end, in real life Peter, Edmund, Susan and Lucy are plain ordinary kids and teens, but in the wardrobe they become four kings and queens of Narnia). Or, use framing: at the edge (start and end) there will be the point of view of that orphan, and in the middle - some sort of team like PowerPuff Girls Z or PreCure, or a stranger cute voice.
Or, if you are dark-spiced person - you may write about this guy trying to deal with all the aspects of the boarding school and finding out the truth about how come if you became adult and you can't live alone after leaving a boarding school - even without parents... Please note that not all boarding schools are actually light and sweet - here in Russia they are full of insane guys >.<
So roll on!!!
Posts : 4587
Join date : 2010-03-03
Age : 16
Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
|Subject: Re: a story with no name Sun Dec 22, 2013 5:04 pm|| |
dO NOT BUMP!!!! ill give you a warning since you seem to be doing it so insistently, and ill leave you with your one infraction, but please stop!
|Subject: Re: a story with no name Today at 12:24 pm|| |