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alison Regular Fantagian
Posts : 229 Join date : 2012-08-02 Age : 24 Location : london
| Subject: a story with no name Thu Oct 31, 2013 4:48 pm | |
| so i just wrote the beginning paragraphs for my story. it's going to be set in the united states and my knowledge of the u.s education system and language and stuff is really limited so please help me with that stuff this does contain swearing and later on, will contain drug and alcohol use and some "raunchy" scenes (if i don't cringe out of writing them): - Spoiler:
There are many things you wouldn’t expect in life, but then again, life is merely a ceaseless gamble, isn’t it? The one thing people always say is to ‘expect the unexpected’. Whoever came up with this quote might as well have added ‘and expect the occasional shitty prospect as well’, because around fifty percent of the time, it’s true.
Which is why I half-expected my parents to have put their feet down and say enough is enough, and ship me off to some uptight boarding school in the middle of nowhere. However, one of the many things I would have never expected to happen in life is for my father to die just a few days after I was dumped in boarding school, leaving me paralysed.
i know this is absolutely TERRIBLE but the purpose of this is so i can get a vague outline of what the story will open with ok so this is the first draft that i randomly wrote in five minutes. | |
| | | Lord Voldemort Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4705 Join date : 2012-08-28 Age : 24 Location : The dark kingdom and it's shadows.
| Subject: Re: a story with no name Thu Oct 31, 2013 5:57 pm | |
| oh wow this is actually a great plot so far i can't wait till this gets made | |
| | | hikayamasan353 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 362 Join date : 2013-12-08 Age : 28 Location : Ukraine, K***-ken, K***-shi, ***-ku, ***-chome, 2-3-1
| Subject: Re: a story with no name Thu Dec 19, 2013 7:52 am | |
| That's very terrible plot =.= However, it might be a perfect starting for a fairy tale about some positive supernatural creatures trying to save you - like in Chronicles of Narnia (at the end, in real life Peter, Edmund, Susan and Lucy are plain ordinary kids and teens, but in the wardrobe they become four kings and queens of Narnia). Or, use framing: at the edge (start and end) there will be the point of view of that orphan, and in the middle - some sort of team like PowerPuff Girls Z or PreCure, or a stranger cute voice. Or, if you are dark-spiced person - you may write about this guy trying to deal with all the aspects of the boarding school and finding out the truth about how come if you became adult and you can't live alone after leaving a boarding school - even without parents... Please note that not all boarding schools are actually light and sweet - here in Russia they are full of insane guys >.< So roll on!!! | |
| | | Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: a story with no name Sun Dec 22, 2013 5:04 pm | |
| dO NOT BUMP!!!! ill give you a warning since you seem to be doing it so insistently, and ill leave you with your one infraction, but please stop! | |
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