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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Fantage... OMG! - Story Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:12 pm | |
| CHAPTER 1:- Spoiler:
My name is Rice. Rice Johnson. I was one of the nerdiest Fantagians in White Seal, but everything changed when I met… Mentholx. All the other Fantagians were screaming, and chanting: “MENTHOLX! MENTHOLX! OMG!” But I was the only one who didn’t go that crazy. That’s why he noticed me. Mentholx waved his hand at me to come forward, and All the other Fantagians stared at me in jealousy. I was so shocked, but still hovered forward light-headed. The Mentholx was actually asking me to come! OMG! He just stood there, and whispered in my ear, “Add me as a friend. Your cooler than the other Fantagians, and I think you can help me out with some things. ” I was dumbstruck. I couldn’t believe it. I requested him as a friend, and he accepted it! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! But then he went POOF! He just logged off and left us there. BUT…
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CrazyCarly Regular Fantagian
Posts : 243 Join date : 2010-07-26 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:16 pm | |
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pokeranger Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5454 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : Loading...
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:53 pm | |
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Nakira Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1137 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 27 Location : the groan zone
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:01 am | |
| You've got a pretty good start. Can't wait to see more. :3 | |
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metro99 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 399 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 25 Location : Somewhere in the Universe!
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:26 am | |
| I read it is very good so far cant wait to read even more of it! | |
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Bloobu Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1100 Join date : 2010-06-05 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:38 am | |
| :O if that happened in real then i wud so be jealous but i still congratulate u XD also i love the beginning and i cant wait for more ^^ | |
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metro99 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 399 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 25 Location : Somewhere in the Universe!
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:39 am | |
| - bloobunny99 wrote:
- :O if that happened in real then i wud so be jealous but i still congratulate u XD
also i love the beginning and i cant wait for more ^^ I would be jealous too but that would be awesome if it happened in real life lol! | |
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CakeBossLover Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1772 Join date : 2010-02-15 Age : 23 Location : In The Wonderful Fantagain World!
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:42 am | |
| wowww!! aweshum u go rice lol! | |
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case1998 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 459 Join date : 2010-05-22 Age : 25 Location : In a AI storage unit.
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:59 am | |
| That was a really good start! | |
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chrysanthemum7 Regular Fantagian
Posts : 230 Join date : 2010-03-28 Age : 23 Location : Yur closet<3
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:14 am | |
| Cool story, Ric! Keep up the good work! XD | |
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v Moderator
Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:18 am | |
| Awesome! I want moar! M! M! lol. | |
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kanna276 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 417 Join date : 2010-07-08 Age : 27 Location : ~Unicorn Land Bro.~
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:25 am | |
| That's an Amazing Story I Want More x3 U Should Make More Chapters And where Did M Go? | |
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Trash Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1685 Join date : 2010-01-31 Age : 25
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:43 am | |
| Very nice, a but a little more texture could be added. -- ''My name was Rice. Rice Johnson. I was one of the nerdiest people in White Seal, everyone made fun of me, every time they say me they would throw things at me.'' pffft something like that^ | |
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roxine Regular Fantagian
Posts : 191 Join date : 2010-07-05 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:49 am | |
| We want more it's very good | |
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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:51 am | |
| LOL OK. I'm gonna work on it today (: If it doesn't come out today then I'm either grounded, dead, or got hit by a truck. LOL! Or busy. | |
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Makkine Moderator
Posts : 2772 Join date : 2010-05-17 Age : 26 Location : Woah
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:53 am | |
| - Anaira wrote:
- Very nice, a but a little more texture could be added.
-- ''My name was Rice. Rice Johnson. I was one of the nerdiest people in White Seal, everyone made fun of me, every time they say me they would throw things at me.''
pffft something like that^ I agree that it needs more texture, but not in the way you said. If I was the author, I would put: ''My name is Rice. Rice Johnson. I felt like one of the nerdiest people in White Seal, always hidden from the crowds, always just another person that the city had randomly decided wasn't worth it," You see? That has a lot more feeling than just "one of the nerdiest people in White Seal." | |
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metro99 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 399 Join date : 2010-07-22 Age : 25 Location : Somewhere in the Universe!
| Subject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:54 am | |
| Lol Ricerz thats funny hopefully you will get some of it done today | |
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