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PostSubject: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:12 pm

CHAPTER 1:
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:16 pm

BUT.. What? Lol
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Tue Jul 27, 2010 11:53 pm

OMG! Where's M? x3
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:01 am

You've got a pretty good start. Can't wait to see more. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:26 am

I read it is very good so far cant wait to read even more of it!
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:38 am

:O if that happened in real then i wud so be jealous but i still congratulate u XD

also i love the beginning and i cant wait for more ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:39 am

bloobunny99 wrote:
:O if that happened in real then i wud so be jealous but i still congratulate u XD

also i love the beginning and i cant wait for more ^^
I would be jealous too but that would be awesome if it happened in real life lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:42 am

wowww!! aweshum u go rice lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:59 am

That was a really good start!
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:14 am

Cool story, Ric! Keep up the good work! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:18 am

Awesome! I want moar!

M! M! lol.

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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:25 am

That's an Amazing Story I Want More x3 U Should Make More Chapters And where Did M Go?
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:43 am

Very nice, a but a little more texture could be added.
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''My name was Rice. Rice Johnson.
I was one of the nerdiest people in White Seal, everyone made fun of me, every time they say me they would throw things at me.''

pffft something like that^
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:49 am

We want more Twisted Evil

Very Happy it's very good
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:51 am

LOL OK. I'm gonna work on it today (: If it doesn't come out today then I'm either grounded, dead, or got hit by a truck. LOL! Or busy.
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:53 am

Anaira wrote:
Very nice, a but a little more texture could be added.
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''My name was Rice. Rice Johnson.
I was one of the nerdiest people in White Seal, everyone made fun of me, every time they say me they would throw things at me.''

pffft something like that^

I agree that it needs more texture, but not in the way you said. If I was the author, I would put:

''My name is Rice. Rice Johnson.
I felt like one of the nerdiest people in White Seal, always hidden from the crowds, always just another person that the city had randomly decided wasn't worth it,"

You see? That has a lot more feeling than just "one of the nerdiest people in White Seal."
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PostSubject: Re: Fantage... OMG! - Story   Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:54 am

Lol Ricerz thats funny hopefully you will get some of it done today
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