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Icarus Fell
Junior Fantagian

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PostSubject: A little story I made.   Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:57 pm

Here's a little tale I made for my little brother:

The Upside Down A::

Please critique! Feel free to be rude if you need to get your point across. ^.^

Myself, I think the story has too much detail, and too little story. What do you think? Smile

._. And thanks a whole bunch if you actually read the whole thing. Have a virtual cookie. Sending... SENT.
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