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PostSubject: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Thu May 15, 2014 11:12 pm

I walked into my room, it seemed mysterious. It felt like someone was watching my every move, following behind me. I unpacked some of my things onto the bed, setting the pillows at the top, and rolling out the thick purple blanket. 1 hour here and it already felt weird. I sat at the foot of my bed, scrolling through texts, then a small breeze came. I looked at the window, hoping that it might've been open. It wasn't, it was locked. I got up, pacing around the fairly large room, wondering what the breeze might of been. I figured it was just a hole in the wall.

*cough* Very sucky indeed *cough* I re wrote whatever the heck I wrote.. - _ - Yes I suck at writing, and writing's my second hobby so my grammar is hella horrid. *cough* ; - ; And this was something I found in my drawer of my unwanted work, a.k.a. projects from 2nd/3rd/4th grade. I just like improved some parts of it that my 10 year old self wrote. I don't know why but I 'loved' writing back then..

here's da rest if you want:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Sat May 17, 2014 1:35 pm

NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Sat May 17, 2014 3:41 pm

The Truth wrote:
NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH

Like I said.. I'm not innocent.. this generation 11 year old kids are dating.. I'm sorry if I disgust you.. I'm sorry if I disgust everyone, it's just the truth. And about using Luke Hemming's name.. yeah he's like my weakness of 5SOS.. I love them all but, people just have that person that makes their heart skip a beat.. you can't stop me from writing posts.. I'm just one of those kids who make up these kind of things. I actually read real literature, I just want to type random shiz.. so I can get my mind off my horrible life. if you couldn't figure out already I like bands, and other random shiz. -.- I'm just really sorry if I disgust you okay... .u. (btw : I never asked if you liked it. and it's called fanfiction so.. i'm pretty sure in order for me to write some type of fanfiction/imagine I would need a person's name. = - = )


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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Sat May 17, 2014 7:39 pm

cassi_cassxx wrote:
The Truth wrote:
NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH

Like I said.. I'm not innocent.. this generation 11 year old kids are dating.. I'm sorry if I disgust you.. I'm sorry if I disgust everyone, it's just the truth. And about using Luke Hemming's name.. yeah he's like my weakness of 5SOS.. I love them all but, people just have that person that makes their heart skip a beat.. you can't stop me from writing posts.. I'm just one of those kids who make up these kind of things. I actually read real literature, I just want to type random shiz.. so I can get my mind off my horrible life. if you couldn't figure out already I like bands, and other random shiz. -.- I'm just really sorry if I disgust you okay... .u.

Try using more scary objects like blood and gore and use a more handsum character like slenderman
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Sat May 17, 2014 9:28 pm

The Truth wrote:
cassi_cassxx wrote:
The Truth wrote:
NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH

Like I said.. I'm not innocent.. this generation 11 year old kids are dating.. I'm sorry if I disgust you.. I'm sorry if I disgust everyone, it's just the truth. And about using Luke Hemming's name.. yeah he's like my weakness of 5SOS.. I love them all but, people just have that person that makes their heart skip a beat.. you can't stop me from writing posts.. I'm just one of those kids who make up these kind of things. I actually read real literature, I just want to type random shiz.. so I can get my mind off my horrible life. if you couldn't figure out already I like bands, and other random shiz. -.- I'm just really sorry if I disgust you okay... .u.

Try using more scary objects like blood and gore and use a more handsum character like slenderman

e-e no thank you... I don't like stuff like that.. I like romance type stories.. xx
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Sun May 18, 2014 1:11 pm

what's going on in this thread
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Sun May 18, 2014 4:30 pm

i'm actually 12 and i listen to slaughter
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Thu Aug 28, 2014 12:19 pm

Not disgusting, but sad and romantic... Hope she really finds her after disappearing... It may be just a teleport, not a vanishment.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Fri Aug 29, 2014 1:35 pm

This is kind of funny because I'm 17 and I feel more innocent than a lot of the preteens. I've only had one kiss, and that was from my prom date... whereas a middle schooler at my local middle school is pregnant. It is a little sad. But what you wrote isn't really even that bad.

PS: I don't really know what 5SOS besides the fact that it's another boy band, but Luke Hemmings is so good looking.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Sat Aug 30, 2014 10:10 pm

11 year olds are DATING? I don't even…what…why?! ;-; The worst I've seen were 13 year olds at my school dating, and even then it was weird to me.

People these days…
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Mon Nov 17, 2014 11:24 pm

This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Tue Nov 18, 2014 6:53 pm

gr8fairy10 wrote:
This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!

Although, I don't mean to bump this topic. Don't curse, and please dont post on topics that are older than 2 weeks.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Tue Nov 18, 2014 9:03 pm

gr8fairy10 wrote:
This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!

^ - ^ okay so, originally this was about luke hemmings. - . - so then i wrote something else.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Tue Nov 18, 2014 9:55 pm

cassidy ♡ wrote:
gr8fairy10 wrote:
This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!

^ - ^ okay so, originally this was about luke hemmings. - . - so then i wrote something else.

Oh hahaha.
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Tue Nov 18, 2014 10:50 pm

p.m wrote:
gr8fairy10 wrote:
This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!

Although, I don't mean to bump this topic. Don't curse, and please dont post on topics that are older than 2 weeks.

Not cursing, just putting two asterisks between an F and a K ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read*   Wed Nov 19, 2014 6:26 am

gr8fairy10 wrote:
p.m wrote:
gr8fairy10 wrote:
This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!

Although, I don't mean to bump this topic. Don't curse, and please dont post on topics that are older than 2 weeks.

Not cursing, just putting two asterisks between an F and a K ^_^

Also, you cant post 2 times in a row. I suggest you read the rules.
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