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Is this good so far?
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No
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Needs a bit of improvement
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Cat2
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PostSubject: War of the Minds (NOT FINISHED AT ALL)    Sun Jun 08, 2014 9:30 am

War of the Minds
Intro
I've got a war in my mind. What happened to this world? The inconvenient. The world I live in is now an abortive, inutile dystopian society. Our world has a defiance of life. A defiance of emotional matters. A defiance of... all things. This world has continuous inactivity and silence, spreading a loose dread of melancholy feelings across all beings that are experiencing the pain of the loss of their members that have been lost in the Area. This is what happened to our world. There is no going back..

~1~
The wind roars as I find my way through the craggy, sloped forest. There is not much of a sound; just the wind and the occasional hootings of an owl. I notice a hole in a tree, which is visible enough for me to see that a bird is creeping through the small opening, watching every movement I make. Every glimpse the bird takes when it looks at me, the higher risk of being getting attacked due to noise. Movement in this Area is critical, your life at risk every second of your life.

BTW I'M NOT DONE AT ALL... Is it good so far? Answer the poll/comment what you think!
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PostSubject: Re: War of the Minds (NOT FINISHED AT ALL)    Sun Jun 08, 2014 4:24 pm

This is very good! Please make more.
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PostSubject: Re: War of the Minds (NOT FINISHED AT ALL)    Mon Jun 09, 2014 12:20 pm

It's amazing so far! Make more make more pleaseeee :DDDD
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PostSubject: Re: War of the Minds (NOT FINISHED AT ALL)    Mon Jun 09, 2014 3:17 pm

MAKE MORE PLEASE I ORDER YOU!


( yes another chance of reading a book that i don't have to pay for mwhahaha)
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PostSubject: Re: War of the Minds (NOT FINISHED AT ALL)    Thu Jun 12, 2014 8:34 pm

Lovin the words used and i think vocab is one of the most important parts of rap but is even more important thats how u can tell u didnt take ur time... good job still tho  cheers 
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