| | Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* | |
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+4hikayamasan353 o Lucille wen 8 posters | Author | Message |
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wen Devoted Fantagian
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| Subject: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Thu May 15, 2014 11:12 pm | |
| I walked into my room, it seemed mysterious. It felt like someone was watching my every move, following behind me. I unpacked some of my things onto the bed, setting the pillows at the top, and rolling out the thick purple blanket. 1 hour here and it already felt weird. I sat at the foot of my bed, scrolling through texts, then a small breeze came. I looked at the window, hoping that it might've been open. It wasn't, it was locked. I got up, pacing around the fairly large room, wondering what the breeze might of been. I figured it was just a hole in the wall. *cough* Very sucky indeed *cough* I re wrote whatever the heck I wrote.. - _ - Yes I suck at writing, and writing's my second hobby so my grammar is hella horrid. *cough* ; - ; And this was something I found in my drawer of my unwanted work, a.k.a. projects from 2nd/3rd/4th grade. I just like improved some parts of it that my 10 year old self wrote. I don't know why but I 'loved' writing back then.. - here's da rest if you want:
I sat back down on the rough beige carpet, fiddling with the apps on my phone. I was just scrolling through twitter, when there was a slight breeze coming from behind me to the front of me. I blinked a couple of times. "Addison. Help.", I heard a voice, cold breath at the crook of my neck. "Who's t- there?", I stuttered, standing up. I walked, pacing around the room, hoping that it was just my imagination. "Addison help.", I heard the voice again, I decided to lay on my bed. Maybe taking a nap will calm me down. I slept for what seemed like the whole day, "Addison.", the voice spoke again, leaving a slight breeze around the room. "Wha-", I sat up, staring at the foot of my bed. There was a girl, no more than 10 years old. "Who are you?", I quietly asked, crawling to the edge of the bed, carefully approaching the small fragile girl. "I'm Belle.", she whispered. "Help. Please.", she said, "What do you need help with?", I asked, inching closer to her. "I need you to help find me.", she whispered, then she disappeared.
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Sat May 17, 2014 1:35 pm | |
| NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH |
| | | wen Devoted Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Sat May 17, 2014 3:41 pm | |
| - The Truth wrote:
- NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH
Like I said.. I'm not innocent.. this generation 11 year old kids are dating.. I'm sorry if I disgust you.. I'm sorry if I disgust everyone, it's just the truth. And about using Luke Hemming's name.. yeah he's like my weakness of 5SOS.. I love them all but, people just have that person that makes their heart skip a beat.. you can't stop me from writing posts.. I'm just one of those kids who make up these kind of things. I actually read real literature, I just want to type random shiz.. so I can get my mind off my horrible life. if you couldn't figure out already I like bands, and other random shiz. -.- I'm just really sorry if I disgust you okay... .u. (btw : I never asked if you liked it. and it's called fanfiction so.. i'm pretty sure in order for me to write some type of fanfiction/imagine I would need a person's name. = - = )
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| | | Lucille Junior Fantagian
Posts : 80 Join date : 2014-05-17 Age : 22 Location : In the world
| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Sat May 17, 2014 7:39 pm | |
| - cassi_cassxx wrote:
- The Truth wrote:
- NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH
Like I said.. I'm not innocent.. this generation 11 year old kids are dating.. I'm sorry if I disgust you.. I'm sorry if I disgust everyone, it's just the truth. And about using Luke Hemming's name.. yeah he's like my weakness of 5SOS.. I love them all but, people just have that person that makes their heart skip a beat.. you can't stop me from writing posts.. I'm just one of those kids who make up these kind of things. I actually read real literature, I just want to type random shiz.. so I can get my mind off my horrible life. if you couldn't figure out already I like bands, and other random shiz. -.- I'm just really sorry if I disgust you okay... .u. Try using more scary objects like blood and gore and use a more handsum character like slenderman | |
| | | wen Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 621 Join date : 2014-05-15 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Sat May 17, 2014 9:28 pm | |
| - The Truth wrote:
- cassi_cassxx wrote:
- The Truth wrote:
- NO! THIS IS JUST DISGUSTING TEXT. DO YOU PEOPLE KNOW THE SIGNIFICANT OF LITERATURE. I TAKE WRITING SERIOUSLY! IM SO UPSET.. I HATE IT IM SO SORRY OK. FIRST WTF IS RONG WITH U USING LUKE H'S NAME. JUST NO STOP UGHHH
Like I said.. I'm not innocent.. this generation 11 year old kids are dating.. I'm sorry if I disgust you.. I'm sorry if I disgust everyone, it's just the truth. And about using Luke Hemming's name.. yeah he's like my weakness of 5SOS.. I love them all but, people just have that person that makes their heart skip a beat.. you can't stop me from writing posts.. I'm just one of those kids who make up these kind of things. I actually read real literature, I just want to type random shiz.. so I can get my mind off my horrible life. if you couldn't figure out already I like bands, and other random shiz. -.- I'm just really sorry if I disgust you okay... .u. Try using more scary objects like blood and gore and use a more handsum character like slenderman e-e no thank you... I don't like stuff like that.. I like romance type stories.. xx | |
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Sun May 18, 2014 1:11 pm | |
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| | | Lucille Junior Fantagian
Posts : 80 Join date : 2014-05-17 Age : 22 Location : In the world
| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Sun May 18, 2014 4:30 pm | |
| i'm actually 12 and i listen to slaughter | |
| | | hikayamasan353 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 362 Join date : 2013-12-08 Age : 28 Location : Ukraine, K***-ken, K***-shi, ***-ku, ***-chome, 2-3-1
| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Thu Aug 28, 2014 12:19 pm | |
| Not disgusting, but sad and romantic... Hope she really finds her after disappearing... It may be just a teleport, not a vanishment. | |
| | | etiquette Regular Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Fri Aug 29, 2014 1:35 pm | |
| This is kind of funny because I'm 17 and I feel more innocent than a lot of the preteens. I've only had one kiss, and that was from my prom date... whereas a middle schooler at my local middle school is pregnant. It is a little sad. But what you wrote isn't really even that bad.
PS: I don't really know what 5SOS besides the fact that it's another boy band, but Luke Hemmings is so good looking. | |
| | | Officer Number Two Loyal Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Sat Aug 30, 2014 10:10 pm | |
| 11 year olds are DATING? I don't even…what…why?! ;-; The worst I've seen were 13 year olds at my school dating, and even then it was weird to me.
People these days… | |
| | | gr8fairy10 New Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Mon Nov 17, 2014 11:24 pm | |
| This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!! | |
| | | p.m New Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Tue Nov 18, 2014 6:53 pm | |
| - gr8fairy10 wrote:
- This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!
Although, I don't mean to bump this topic. Don't curse, and please dont post on topics that are older than 2 weeks. | |
| | | wen Devoted Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Tue Nov 18, 2014 9:03 pm | |
| - gr8fairy10 wrote:
- This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!
^ - ^ okay so, originally this was about luke hemmings. - . - so then i wrote something else. | |
| | | gr8fairy10 New Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Tue Nov 18, 2014 9:55 pm | |
| - cassidy ♡ wrote:
- gr8fairy10 wrote:
- This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!
^ - ^ okay so, originally this was about luke hemmings. - . - so then i wrote something else. Oh hahaha. | |
| | | gr8fairy10 New Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Tue Nov 18, 2014 10:50 pm | |
| - p.m wrote:
- gr8fairy10 wrote:
- This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!
Although, I don't mean to bump this topic. Don't curse, and please dont post on topics that are older than 2 weeks. Not cursing, just putting two asterisks between an F and a K ^_^ | |
| | | p.m New Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Something I wrote when I was 10 *Don't Read* Wed Nov 19, 2014 6:26 am | |
| - gr8fairy10 wrote:
- p.m wrote:
- gr8fairy10 wrote:
- This is good! Idk why so many people are raging about Luke!! Like he isn't even in here!! What the heck ppl?? It's just a story grow the f**k up and move on to important stuffs!!
Although, I don't mean to bump this topic. Don't curse, and please dont post on topics that are older than 2 weeks. Not cursing, just putting two asterisks between an F and a K ^_^ Also, you cant post 2 times in a row. I suggest you read the rules. | |
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