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MsJoyMaeda
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PostSubject: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Thu Nov 20, 2014 4:54 pm

okay first i would like apologize for not logging on lately aahaha

In Social Studies, the class was given an assignment. We had to write a letter, pretending to be an individual during the Pre-Civil War time of America. I chose to be an Irish immigrant. Here's what I have so far. It's... uh... pretty long since it needs to be at least 3 paragraphs long.

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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Thu Nov 20, 2014 6:52 pm

This is actually really good! If you don't mind me asking, what grade are you in?
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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Thu Nov 20, 2014 8:20 pm

p.m wrote:
This is actually really good! If you don't mind me asking, what grade are you in?

Ah, thank you!

I am a freshman in high school (9th grade)
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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Sat Nov 22, 2014 9:40 am

Komaeda wrote:
p.m wrote:
This is actually really good! If you don't mind me asking, what grade are you in?

Ah, thank you!

I am a freshman in high school (9th grade)

Ohh, no wonder its literally perfect. I'm an 8th grader c: Did your teacher grade this yet?
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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Sat Nov 22, 2014 10:57 am

p.m wrote:
Komaeda wrote:
p.m wrote:
This is actually really good! If you don't mind me asking, what grade are you in?

Ah, thank you!

I am a freshman in high school (9th grade)

Ohh, no wonder its literally perfect. I'm an 8th grader c: Did your teacher grade this yet?

Perfect? Nuuuu my writing is far from perfect, believe me! He didn't grade it yet.
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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Sat Nov 22, 2014 2:25 pm

Komaeda wrote:
p.m wrote:
Komaeda wrote:
p.m wrote:
This is actually really good! If you don't mind me asking, what grade are you in?

Ah, thank you!

I am a freshman in high school (9th grade)

Ohh, no wonder its literally perfect. I'm an 8th grader c: Did your teacher grade this yet?

Perfect? Nuuuu my writing is far from perfect, believe me! He didn't grade it yet.

Well, since you dont think your writing is perfect than it's close to perfect.
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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Sat Nov 22, 2014 8:33 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:44 am

Your writing is very descriptive and the theme stays consistent throughout the whole piece, which is great! The only thing I would suggest is revising for spelling errors (reading out loud helps) and adding a conclusion. The end kind of leaves you "hanging", so I recommend you add in an important lesson your character has learned or something of the sort after the third paragraph. Oh, and don't forget to add a "from" part at the bottom!
Good luck on your writing!!
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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Sun Nov 23, 2014 4:13 pm

Legend. wrote:
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PostSubject: Re: Letter Writing Assignment; Opinions?   Sat Dec 20, 2014 6:41 pm

what did you get for your grade
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