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PostSubject: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:53 pm

So, um, a story. I got tired of the Tsuki one, and sugar lime got REALLY un-popular. D:
I really liked the idea for this one too, so, :3

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Chapter 1- Prepearing for Yerohieme.

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Chapter 2- The boy from Iretopie

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Chapter 2- Enemies faith

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Chapter 3- New Home
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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:55 pm

Wow! That is really a good start!
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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:56 pm

great job i luv it
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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Fri Aug 06, 2010 4:22 pm

Pretty good start, can't wait to read more. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:57 pm

Chapter 1 is up, if anyone cares. XD
I really liked this story, so I hope SOMEONE reads it.

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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:26 pm

Moar pwease?

I want Chapter 2 naooo, or else. XD

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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:35 pm

miyeon wrote:
Moar pwease?

I want Chapter 2 naooo, or else. XD

Thank you, this means alot, considering my stories never get popular. :C
I hope to finish this story, no guarantees tho.

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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Thu Aug 19, 2010 5:54 am

"KURION! WAKE UP RIGHT NOW OR YOU WONT SEE ANOTHER GLIMPSE OF DAYLIGHT IN YOUR HOLE LIFE!" XD that made me laugh

anywayss glad for another story (havent read much lately DX) i shall expecting more chapters of this standard >Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:20 am

This is an excellent idea for a story, and your grammar/spelling is pretty good. The characters are believable and likable. I wanna see more soon~. XP
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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Fri Aug 20, 2010 6:58 pm

I just posted chapter 2.
This boy is gonna appear later, just so you know. ;3

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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:41 pm

Oh~! A new character! Can't wait to read more! I'd like it if you used more punctuation/capitalization though. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: The End- A story by Kawaii Maker.   Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:55 pm

Theres a new chapter up. C:
I hope you like it. XD

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