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PostSubject: The one who laughs last   Mon Aug 23, 2010 9:47 pm

Chapter 1:
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Chapter 2:
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Chapter 3:
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Chapter 4:
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Chapter 5:
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Chapter 7:
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Chapter 8
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Chapter 9:

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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Mon Aug 23, 2010 10:05 pm

Wow.
I love your character's description.
And also the description of the cracks on the cliffs and how they resembled Julia's feelings at the moment.
I'm really looking forward for Chapter 2 ;D
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Mon Aug 23, 2010 10:17 pm

This. Is. Amazing.

I'll write up a good critique when I stop staring at it in wonder.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Mon Aug 23, 2010 11:47 pm

Dude, this story is so detailed I don't understand. ROFL No offense, this story is so good, that most of the words aren't in my vocabulary. LOL!
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Wed Aug 25, 2010 4:54 pm

Nakira wrote:
This. Is. Amazing.

I'll write up a good critique when I stop staring at it in wonder.

I am so touched, this is how I feel about your story. FF's writing leaugue, unite!

I'll write the second chapter soon.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Wed Aug 25, 2010 5:03 pm

IluvJB36 wrote:
Nakira wrote:
This. Is. Amazing.

I'll write up a good critique when I stop staring at it in wonder.

I am so touched, this is how I feel about your story. FF's writing leaugue, unite!

I'll write the second chapter soon.

YAYY I CAN'T WAIT!!! ;D
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:11 pm

IluvJB36 wrote:
Nakira wrote:
This. Is. Amazing.

I'll write up a good critique when I stop staring at it in wonder.

I am so touched, this is how I feel about your story. FF's writing leaugue, unite!

I'll write the second chapter soon.

Yesss, more chapters!

UNITE! >:3
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:22 pm

Chaa this is so epic.
pwepwpepwep.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:39 pm

Spoiler:
 

Chapter 2 is out!
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:49 pm

Hnnnnng!! This is just so... so... amazing~. 8D
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:20 pm

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Sorry for forgetting to post it...
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Tue Sep 07, 2010 10:29 pm

Ahhhh this is so amazing! The part about the "maybes piling up in her head" was so well written! I need more soon! 8D
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:53 pm

I just made chapter 4!

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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:58 pm

Will we ever see the puppet-boy again?

The bit about silence was amazing. I need moreeeeeee... *_*
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:03 pm

Yes, we will be seeing the puppet-boy again, but I'm not giving any spoilers! Guess...

Also, I also loved the part about the silence, by that time I had entered my trance-state-thingy where it's more of a stream-of-conciousness. That's why my begginnings are weaker than my endings. I hat emy beginnings.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:38 am

Same here, I find it hard to start writing. D:

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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:10 pm

Chapter 5:

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FINALLY!
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Wed Sep 22, 2010 10:50 pm

Arggghhh this is so good and suspenseful!!!!! Also, I really want to know why she's here.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:24 pm

thenextchapteristheepicwin.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Wed Oct 06, 2010 7:39 pm

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Obviously Mr. Somque has a different difinition for "story" than we do. Also, gahhhhhhh longness.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Fri Oct 08, 2010 7:31 pm

Glasses guy<3. Anyways, you need more readers. >:U
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:36 pm

dont make fun of ppl who have glasses.cuz i do >.< tweehwee tongue
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:44 pm

I don't think I am... Would you please explain? I have glasses too, so I don't think I'd make fun of them.
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:52 pm

IluvJB36 wrote:
I don't think I am... Would you please explain? I have glasses too, so I don't think I'd make fun of them.

lol not you,i ment nakira
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PostSubject: Re: The one who laughs last   Fri Oct 08, 2010 8:55 pm

Toochey-cookey wrote:
dont make fun of ppl who have glasses.cuz i do >.< tweehwee :tongue:

What are you talking about? Notice the <3 at the end of glassesguy. Lol.

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