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PostSubject: 2 Poems   Fri Feb 12, 2010 3:57 pm

I did not want to write in my bestest's friend's topic because people would lose the interest at hers, which are great, so I made a new topic.

Two Poems.

First, I wish; By me.

I wish you would have told me;
I wish you never left.
I knew there was a moment;
when you really made me dead;
Inside and out;
It was no joke;
I wish I would have told you;
But now it is too late.
I see now my mistake,
with all its hatred.
I see myself in your hands;
Even though its not even worth it.

Second, You still didnt know; by me.

There was a time,
just this one perfect moment;
It was raining.
You took your umbrella out and covered me;
I knew you didn't know;
But I felt like a princess;
I was in love with you.
You took me under your hands,
and protected me from the rain;
Every drop showed a little of what I believed in;
And I knew you still didn't know.
You put your hand over me;
And I felt so in love;
You only did it because you cared;
Everything was wonderfull, you really dared.

I am still writing this, and yet you still dont know.
That I am your princess and your soul is my soul.

Yes, they're romantic.

Enjoy, rate, and comment!
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:05 pm

awwww how cute! 8/10 that was very nice but arent poems supposed to rhyme?
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Fri Feb 12, 2010 4:06 pm

Not really. And, thanks!
Poems dont need to rhyme, they have to come from the heart and/or ink.
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:01 pm

Its awesome! Great job Anaira!
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:23 pm

Awesome job! So romantic <3
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Fri Feb 12, 2010 5:40 pm

aww!! cute!! <33 it! my fav is the last one!! so AWESOME!! great job! keep it uppp!!!
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:03 am

that cute 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:28 am

OMG the last one is soooo cute!!! 10/10! omg i luv the last one
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PostSubject: Re: 2 Poems   Sat Feb 13, 2010 12:55 pm

I love the first one!!! Good Job!
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