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PostSubject: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:19 pm

~Prologue~
[Rain's POV]
Spoiler:
 

~Chapter 1~
[Rain's POV]
Spoiler:
 


~Chapter 2~
[Neutral POV]
Spoiler:
 


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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:41 pm

GOODY CANT WAIT FOR MORE Smile
(srry for caps Razz)
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:43 pm

This is interesting. Can't wait to see more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:40 am

Thanks guise. :3

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:47 am

No offense Miyeon, but honestly I don't think you're gonna finish this story, just like you didn't finish any of your other stories.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:48 am

Sharpsul99 wrote:
No offense Miyeon, but honestly I don't think you're gonna finish this story, just like you didn't finish any of your other stories.

You didnt finish alot of your stories either.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sat Sep 11, 2010 9:58 am

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Sharpsul99 wrote:
No offense Miyeon, but honestly I don't think you're gonna finish this story, just like you didn't finish any of your other stories.

You didnt finish alot of your stories either.

The only story I didn't finish was ''Sharpsul, Heroic'', and that was a practice story.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:07 am

Oh, shut up Sharp. No offence, but I like this story more than I like your story. And, if you don't like a story, then don't comment! Jeez...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:09 am

Sharpsul99 wrote:
Timegear wrote:
Sharpsul99 wrote:
No offense Miyeon, but honestly I don't think you're gonna finish this story, just like you didn't finish any of your other stories.

You didnt finish alot of your stories either.

The only story I didn't finish was ''Sharpsul, Heroic'', and that was a practice story.

You didnt finish bonds, sharpsul 2, sharpsul 3, etcetcetc.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sat Sep 11, 2010 11:41 am

cant wait for the full story ^^

is this set in the olden days? just asking because of the names mother, father and brother XD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sun Sep 12, 2010 12:00 am

Yay, I finished the prologue! C:

And Thanks Bloo. :3

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:38 pm

~Chapter 1~
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[EDIT: Sorry for double posting. >.<]

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:51 am

Wow!!! It's truly wonderful!!!

And by the way Hitsugaya is supposed to be miyeon??
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:07 am

FreedoM 4EVA wrote:
Wow!!! It's truly wonderful!!!

And by the way Hitsugaya is supposed to be miyeon??

Yup, lol. And Thanks~ :3

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:10 pm

@Timegear- Working on those stories Wink

Well, I don't really read anybodies stories on here, I just read Beauty's, so, yeah...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:27 pm

(YOU DON'T READ MINE?! HOW DARE YOU?)

I want to give you critisism, Sharp (on your story, so you can get to be a better writer. I always critisize people, but with no ill intention), but you take it so badly that I didn't.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:27 pm

Sharpsul99 wrote:
Well, I don't really read anybodies stories on here, I just read Beauty's, so, yeah...

do you read mine? [:

and miyeon, cant wait for more of your story :]

hope yew do finish it :]
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 9:52 pm

Thanks guise. ;3
I'm writing Ch. 2 in Microsoft Word right now.

BTW, I'm using the POV thingy like Nakira and Taylor too.

[Sorry if it seems like copying guise. :3]

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:26 pm

Wow, at first I didn't feel like reading any stories, but once I read it, I was hooked! This is really good. The descriptions, characters, plot, everything! ^_^ Oh, and it's okay if you use the POV thingy.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:33 pm

Her name is Sumin? I have a friend called Sumin!

I love the tone you are working on in this story! I can really connect with your characters, this is completely different from the last story you wrote... as in, better. I don't have any critique, except maybe work on your clarity.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:52 pm

I really like the story! Smile
Have you thought of like idk making it into a manga?
I mean, like animating the characters and such? Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:53 pm

Sasume wrote:
I really like the story! Smile
Have you thought of like idk making it into a manga?
I mean, like animating the characters and such? Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:54 pm

Sasume wrote:
I really like the story! Smile
Have you thought of like idk making it into a manga?
I mean, like animating the characters and such? Very Happy

Haha, I tried making a manga once.
EPIC.FAILURE.
I might try again though.
And Tsutsu, this might make a WONDERFUL manga.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 10:58 pm

Timegear wrote:
Sasume wrote:
I really like the story! Smile
Have you thought of like idk making it into a manga?
I mean, like animating the characters and such? Very Happy

Haha, I tried making a manga once.
EPIC.FAILURE.
I might try again though.
And Tsutsu, this might make a WONDERFUL manga.

lol ya me sasume planned to make a manga we never really started though just a begnning story
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PostSubject: Re: ~Demons Unleashed~ A Story   Wed Sep 15, 2010 11:01 pm

foreveran wrote:
Sasume wrote:
I really like the story! Smile
Have you thought of like idk making it into a manga?
I mean, like animating the characters and such? Very Happy

yes ur online
check ur inbox kk about to sen u message

Lol, kay.

Timegear wrote:
Sasume wrote:
I really like the story! Smile
Have you thought of like idk making it into a manga?
I mean, like animating the characters and such? Very Happy

Haha, I tried making a manga once.
EPIC.FAILURE.
I might try again though.
And Tsutsu, this might make a WONDERFUL manga.

LOL.
Me and Margie were trying to attempt one!
still havent got much progress yet ):
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