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Bluerivers1
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PostSubject: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:45 pm

Chapter One



I stared at my poorly drawn magazine cover that I did over a printed out copy of a model online.
The dress was sea green, with dark/light gray ribbons across it. It turned out to look like light and dark pencil lines smudged around the sea green colored pencil I used.
The hair was brown marker that bled through the paper, and the beret was light pencil. So was the shoe.
In the end, it looked horrible. I couldn't draw the other shoe, and messed up, so I poked a hole in the paper with a scissors and cut that part out, then pasted a piece of an old magazine article behind it so it looked like someone cut out my model's foot for a collage or something.
Sighing, I flopped down on my bed and stared at the poster on my wall of Gigi Beritzen.

It was an all white poster of her dressed in her costume from her new movie, The Allegheny River Dancers.
It was about a girl named Chassie(Gigi's part) who loved ballet, but then died in a car crash. After that, she found herself dancing on water, as an angel. The only reason she was sent back, she realized, in the end, was to relieve her death from her peers. In the "End" she looks at the sky and there's a big stream of light rising her up, and she smiles and starts crying(her spirit does anyway), and then she throws her dancing shoe down and the last scene is her face smiling and her hand waving, then the scene freezes and fades off.
The music's incredibly cheap, as well. It's Miley Cyrus's Butterfly Fly Away.
There's nothing cheaper than that girl, I swear.
BUT, anyway. I looked at the picture I'd gotten drawn of myself at a carnival.

Ahh. It was made by this cartoonist guy that made me pay $20.00 for one drawing. I realized that that was pretty much a self-portrait.
Silently and peacefully, I drew up a SumUp of The Day on my wall with a pencil and colored markers.

It went like this:

SumUp of The Day
Kindness
Anger
Acting
Boredom
More Boredom
Extra Boredom
What you don't do to popular people
can't hurt them.

Then, I picked up my hairbrush and started to sing P!nk's So What.
I got so into it, my body started moving and my finger started pointing at an imaginary audience. When I sang the final words, I threw my head back like a rock star.
And to my surprise, my door had been open.
And a pair of eyes had been watching me the entire time.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:58 pm

OMFG MORE MORE MORE! That is the best story ever!!!!!!!1!!!111
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:00 pm

Thankkk yooouuu.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:01 pm

That was really good! (:
I can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:06 pm

wow the pictures are amazing!!!! Great story too!!!!! Can't wait for more Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:18 pm

Chapter Two

"Ohh, hi, Pancake," I said to my cat as she strutted in.
I looked in my vent.
I saw someone push something. The vents in our house were big enough for a 5-7 year old to crawl around in. A chill went through my body, but I forgot about it all when I saw what they left.



A prom dress cover! With a design I DREW!
I'd drawn it years ago! And the magazine was real!
I let out a Wilhelm scream that was soooo loud I almost regretted it.
My mom came up, and she said, "Oh my God, Kris, you alright?"
"Fine," I said. Then I realized something.
If she saw the magazine, my mother would FLIP.
She always did when I had magazines. I don't know why.
She's always paranoid about that kind of stuff, cuz one time on TV, I saw this music video from the 80's with someone who looked like Mom in it. She was amazing at singing AND dancing. But she turned it off right at the end of the video.
I collapsed in fear, and pretended to faint.
Only, unfortunately, I actually did.

Yeah, I know it's short, but it's a cliffie.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:23 pm

awww... the story is osm!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:24 pm

amazing story!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Wed Feb 17, 2010 10:34 am

Cool story... ...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Wed Feb 17, 2010 12:27 pm

Awesome story! Its amazing!!!!! Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:40 pm

cool story blue
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Sat Feb 20, 2010 5:48 am

KEWL!! AWESOME!! totally can't wait for more!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:20 pm

When will you come up with a new chapter? o.o
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Sat Feb 20, 2010 6:50 pm

The story is soo good!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:07 pm

interesting story!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:33 pm

Her mom caught her singing. Tragic.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:34 pm

Blueriver's Quit.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:40 pm

Really? That's sad.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:18 pm

Amazing Story! :3 Can't wait for more!

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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:36 pm

miyeon wrote:
Amazing Story! :3 Can't wait for more!

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PostSubject: Re: ~Magaz!ne~   Sun Mar 07, 2010 2:41 pm

sharpsul99 wrote:
miyeon wrote:
Amazing Story! :3 Can't wait for more!

Blue quit..

Oh aha! I'm slow XDD

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