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PostSubject: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:14 pm

Yaah, a short story. Its all here. I enjoy writing these. .3.
ITS SO WANNABE HACHI YAY! :DD
Anyways, it doesn't have a name. Razz
Here it is:




The shattered pieces, they stood there. She tried to fix it, but what would be the point. She lived in a world where it wouldn’t work.

The glue ran out quickly, she had wasted it all on acts she had done to the crowd. The man next to her, with the ridiculous amount of make-up, decided he would light himself on fire for the next act.

That was the last performance he made.

Some ashes that lay on the floor, and the girl would rake them with a broom, only to keep them in the shattered glass.

The make-up ran out, she had thrown it all onto the air, making the birds look awfully odd. The fox next to her, that would keep her company, decided he would try to kill a lion for his next act.

The fox was never seen again.

The girl picked up a bit of fur from the stage floor, as the audience cheered. She smirked at them, and would hurry back to her house.

The rest of the crew, which all wore a bit of paint on their heads, stared at the girl with a lot of fear.

The women came, wearing a dark black robe. They all bowed, and she silently pointed fingers. Each time a person would be pointed, they would seem to faint.

The girl however, remained shyly standing, but looking forward to having a finger laid on her.

Soon there was only two left, and the boy with the dyed green hair was chosen. The girl congratulated him. The boy merely shuddered.

Day after day, the crew disappeared. Each of them would each decide their fate the night before the performance, and attempt to find a excuse why NOT to do it the next.

The girl would announce them all, and the crowd would roar when they were gone forever. The girl would be ashamed of them, and blankly sit down in the house.

The women came again, her hair was short and dyed white, and she was wearing a long red dress.

She pointed at the girl, who was wearing tattered clothing for seeing all the deaths. She smiled.
The stage stood in front of her, and she grinned.
She announced that this was going to be the last time they performed. The audience booed until she explained her reason, which made them excited.

The girl stood across, and as the coward she was, she had decided to vanish by sitting in a plane, with no driver. She knew she wouldn’t be able to stop the death, so she decided to do it.

As the girl flew across the sky, the people were amazed as the plane fell. When they heard the long, roaring crash, they all cheered, and a ton of the children huddled in fear, as they did when they saw the other die. They all left, and the place was deserted.

A young women lies in a plane, eating whatever she can find, and leaving to do some other things in the after noon.

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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:21 pm

That kind calms me down a bit,its peaceful.Its a great story,10/10.
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:34 pm

Feaky, sis. Not sure if I understand. Freaky.
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:34 pm

IluvJB36 wrote:
Feaky, sis. Not sure if I understand. Freaky.

It was supposed to be freaky, and you weren't supposed to understand. ;DD

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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:41 pm

Its just like an author I am obsessed with:
LEMONY SNICKET!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:43 pm

TaylorFox00 wrote:
Its just like an author I am obsessed with:
LEMONY SNICKET!!!

I lav that dude. <3
But nah, my style doesn't seem like his at all. ;-;
Glad you liked it though. :3

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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:47 pm

OMG you should be an author when yu grow up,if you want to.I rate it beautiful doggy/random stuff.
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:27 pm

Ah yes, I forgot. The writing style was supposed to be a bit confusing, leaving a bit of details out.
Thats why you never know how the main character looks like, or even her name.

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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:08 am

Teehee.... That was a nice story you wrote! I'm terrible at writing short stories.
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:10 pm

pokeranger wrote:
Teehee.... That was a nice story you wrote! I'm terrible at writing short stories.

No.. No your not. xD
Anyways, glad you liked it! :3

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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Tue Oct 12, 2010 12:11 pm

omg love the story! amazingg!
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:24 pm

OH MEH GAWD I RATE 10/10!
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:43 pm

Attaway m'friend!

I have some idea's on what you secretly mean on this... *goo* Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:48 pm

???WHAT THE?OK JUST BYE.
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:50 am

Byakuya wrote:
Attaway m'friend!

I have some idea's on what you secretly mean on this... *goo* Very Happy

Hun, feel free to type what you think here.
And toochey, WHAT? OMG WTH DO YOU MEANN?
No really, what do you mean?

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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Sun Oct 17, 2010 11:23 am

This is freaky and confusing and awesome. 10/10 ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Story! HURRAY!   Tue Oct 19, 2010 6:34 pm

Nakira wrote:
This is freaky and confusing and awesome. 10/10 ^_^

FGFGFGF COMPLIMENTED.
Sorry, your writing is so epic and like.. :DDD

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