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Sharpsul999
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PostSubject: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 10:32 am

As many of you know, I won 2 Writer's Den contests.

1: Holiday Stories (during December)
2. Valentine's Day Stories

I am aiming for my third win, and hoping I get first place, this week's theme was Fantage Themed Poems. Here's my entry I sent to Fantage:
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"Spring time shining,
Winter hiding,
Spring is rising,
To the sky.

Winter sleeps,
Birds tweet,
Winter yawns,
Garden Field Lawns.

Animals wake up,
Spring shakes up.

Spring flowers bloom,
What a tune!

No more cold,
Its on hold!

Spring gets funner every day,
so why not join in on the play!"


What do you guys think?
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 1:06 pm

I think its pretty good! Smile Great job!
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 1:16 pm

Thanks, i means a lot, especially when I get to win Smile.
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 1:23 pm

I thinks its worthy of winning, and no prob.
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 2:40 pm

It's an awesome poem. I'm not saying that it's bad in any way, but you can say creatures instead of animals to make it seem more fantage-related.
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 4:54 pm

wow thats a great poem!
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:47 pm

its great sharp i saw on the comet
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Thu Feb 18, 2010 7:54 pm

Nice poem, but don't expect you to win easily. ;D
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PostSubject: Re: Sharp's Writer's Den Entry   Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:35 pm

Lol ur right pkeranger. Hope I win though!
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