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case1998
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PostSubject: Dragon's Blood   Sat Oct 30, 2010 12:27 pm

Hey guys! I'm making a story, Dragon's Blood! Chapter 4 is up now. I'll put up a new chapter soon!

Preview:
 
Chapter1:
 
Chapter 2:
 
Chapter3:
 
Chapter 4:
 
Chapter 5(Half of it):
 



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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Sat Oct 30, 2010 12:41 pm

Win. Just win. I'm looking forward to it. Just, less exclamation marks? 10-10.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Sat Oct 30, 2010 2:46 pm

I'll remember that nxt time
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Sat Oct 30, 2010 4:54 pm

cool beginning!
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Mon Nov 01, 2010 2:53 pm

Chapter 1 is up!
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Mon Nov 01, 2010 5:10 pm

Aha! Ignus is like Ignitus, which means Fire! Sort of! I have a feeling something to do with fire will happen...
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Mon Nov 01, 2010 6:37 pm

Ignus is fire in Greek/Roman. That's were the term "igneous rock" comes from. And considering the story's name is Dragon's Blood, I would agree.

At Case: You certainly have the makings of a good writer, but I think you need to, again, drop the exclamation marks, and harness that raw emotion and power you possessed in the prologue again. I won't rate this time, sorry.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:08 am

Ya I'm working on chapter 2. I'll try to remember that.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Thu Nov 04, 2010 5:56 pm

Sorry for double posting but... Chapter 2 is up!
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:56 pm

Is this in thrid person or first person?
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:09 pm

Opps! Sorry I wrote this Chapter when my Grandparents were here. They kept saying "I" so I messed up.

EDIT: OK! Fixed it!
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:07 pm

Cool story.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Tue Nov 16, 2010 6:48 pm

really great awesome
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Thu Nov 18, 2010 4:35 pm

Chapter 3 is up! (Finally!)
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:00 pm

Ahh! Im double posting again! Chapter 4 is up!
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:06 pm

I'm not in a reading mood right now, but I read half of it, and I must say this is much better! You are really talented, you know. Specifically, I must say you have an eye for detail. There is no micro-environment/micro-expression that doesn't get it's own description. While I was reading this, I was reminded of a particular author, and I had no idea which until now... J.K Rowling. Yes, you both share the same matter-of-hand, not particularly wordy, description which lets the reader imagine the scene without giving them more help than necessary.
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Sat Dec 04, 2010 4:16 am

i luv it! its really great! im gonna wait for more chapters...
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PostSubject: Re: Dragon's Blood   Wed Dec 22, 2010 4:16 pm

I have a new chapter but it's only half of it. I'll post the next half before Christmas hopefully!
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