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 Portal Series: The Next Phase

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Lyli
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PostSubject: Portal Series: The Next Phase   Portal Series: The Next Phase Icon_minitimeFri Nov 05, 2010 6:37 pm

Okay, almost a year ago I created a Fantage series called "The Portal" and I never really finished it.

But, I'm making a second "Portal Series" called "Portal Series: The Next Phase"

Here's the trailer:

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PostSubject: Re: Portal Series: The Next Phase   Portal Series: The Next Phase Icon_minitimeFri Nov 05, 2010 8:26 pm

Cool, I was never into fantage videos. And you used way too many effects on the text, I'll just be honest. I could barely read anything you put on there. I also feel like you overlapped the music on one part towards the end, and it sounded... a little odd. But if that was just how the music itself is, the ignore that part. And honestly it just seems like a typical fantage story. Some one wants to destroy fantage, thats the plot line for 99% of fantage stories, but just make sure you make it creative and add your style into it. You do a great job on other things, so I'm sure you'll do amazingly on this.
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