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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:59 pm

Awesome story!!! x3 Love it.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:51 am

Chapter 11 will be out near 1 or 2:00 PM EST!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:59 am

Cool, I love this story I don't usually read xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:46 pm

Cool story (; Keep up the good work
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:47 pm

Its a good story! THis story is really great!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:52 pm

Just to get your excitement up, I am writing a short sneakpeak of Chapter 1's next story, Sharp the Fantagian #2 !
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:52 pm

There's going to be a #2 Sharp? Can't wait!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 3:53 pm

YESH!!!! #2 is coming out!
I'm soo excited about it coming out which is a miracle! XD

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:04 pm

I can't believe we kids have a creative imaginations! I wonder if these stories are better than any writers! This story is so addicting!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:15 pm

pokeranger wrote:
I can't believe we kids have a creative imaginations! I wonder if these stories are better than any writers! This story is so addicting!

Thank You!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:45 pm

Sharpsul99 wrote:
pokeranger wrote:
I can't believe we kids have a creative imaginations! I wonder if these stories are better than any writers! This story is so addicting!

Thank You!!

Your welcome! As if I don't like fascinating stories like this!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:50 pm

Chapter 11 is out!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:53 pm

Chapter 11 is good! Spooky! Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:56 pm

awesome and suspenseful!! i can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:58 pm

Chapter 12~ Pain In The Dark is a special chapter! It will be released today! Same for Chapter 13!

Tomorrow:

Chapter 13: Twilight

Chapter 14: Chuko the Great Sage


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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 4:59 pm

ahhh omg i cant wait! sharp ur an AMAZING writer!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:00 pm

pinkys wrote:
ahhh omg i cant wait! sharp ur an AMAZING writer!

Why thank you. I use to write stories in RL.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:09 pm

It was pretty well written! The only thing is that in some parts you have wayyy to many people saying the pretty much same exact thing. If you want to put them in your story space them out AND use them more than once. Overall, i thought it was great!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:17 pm

Thanks Blue. Where is it repeating the same exact stuff, by the way.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:20 pm

This part...

"Holy smokes!" Canada said, running for his life.

"Look out!" Sameer said.

"A tornado!" Andrew shouted.

Was just kinda random you didnt introduce the characters, if you want to use someone you havent talked about yet you need to intoduce them in or say something like a random person i saw when ____ was happening. Not trying to be bossy just trying to help you make it better becuase yes you are younger than me...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:20 pm

You kept on repeating stuff? I didn't notice. o.o
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:23 pm

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This part...

"Holy smokes!" Canada said, running for his life.

"Look out!" Sameer said.

"A tornado!" Andrew shouted.

Was just kinda random you didnt introduce the characters, if you want to use someone you havent talked about yet you need to intoduce them in or say something like a random person i saw when ____ was happening. Not trying to be bossy just trying to help you make it better becuase yes you are younger than me...

Thanks for the tip.

Here is Chapter 12's banner.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:35 pm

I love chapter 11! Why, I kept reading it and my little brother is mad at me because he wants to go on XD

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 5:58 pm

Chapter 12 is out! Please enjoy this special chapter!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharp the Fantagian~ #1   Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:03 pm

Ooh, I also love chapter 12! Who am i kidding? I love all of them! xD
I wonder what happens next... Can't wait for more!

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