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rainbowpooper
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PostSubject: A Bodacious Story   Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:41 pm


Chap 1.
I bit my cheeseburger and stared across the table like I had nothing better to do. There sat my chubby best friend, Isla. Isla Emennuel. She’d probably gained the weight watching tv. That’s all she ever did when I wasn’t around, anyway.
“Does that taste good?”
Isla bit into a huge onion ring, dripping with grease. I turned away.
Her expression gave it away that she had no clue she was being so revolting. I almost threw up at the sight of grease spilling out of Isla’s mouth.
Her horrible red drugstore lipstick was melting off like wet paint being hosed down, and half of it had gone on her snaggletooth.
Her “classy” Max Azria and Miley Cyrus plaid skirt clashed against her tye-dye’d tee shirt, and her red eyeliner-wait, it wasn’t eyeliner. It was the lipstick she had on her lips.
Isla’s Doc Martens were half off her feet, revealing candy-cane looking socks. They went up to her thighs.
Her black hair and cut-straight-across-the-forehead-bangs were suffocating me as I finger-combed my chestnut brown, straight hair.
The tangles in Isla’s were like ropes.
I looked at my attire in my compact mirror, leaving my burger untouched.
My MAC black eyeliner was perfect with my shimmer Elf liquid eyeliner. My navy blue eyes were beautiful and my Falsies mascara was accenting it all.
Taking another look at my lips, I re-glossed them with a shimmery soft pink color from Avon.
Beautiful.
My pink boyfriend shirt looked great with my short jean shorts that were softly ripped since I’d worn them so often this summer.
Last but not least, my black Aero flip flops finished off the look, with all my nails painted the same color my lip gloss was.
Isla was the exact opposite.
I sipped my diet lemon water, and then Isla’s crappy Nokia got a text.
“Oooohhh my God.”
“What?”
“Justin Timberlake’s gonna perform in space soon!”
“Yeah, right. Those people just wanna sell you out so they can get the cash.”
Before I knew it, onion ring grease from Isla’s yelling was in my face.
I threw my glass at her.
It shattered, and I didn’t stick around long enough to hear what happened after she screamed in pain.
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PostSubject: Re: A Bodacious Story   Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:45 pm

This is clearly amazing
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PostSubject: Re: A Bodacious Story   Sat Dec 11, 2010 2:11 pm

OK so here is a creepy story.
So one day we were doing our math at school and this boy in my class named Alex Nagel. And this other boy named Timothy Sciortino said "Alex only got 2 hours of sleep" Then this girl who sits next to Alex her name is Alina Scholz. then like after 20 or so minutes of math Alina go's MRS.SAMSON ALEX PASSED OUT!!!!! And he did 100% passed out. My teacher went: "OH MY GOD SOMEONE GO GET THE NURSE ALEX C'MON SAY SOMETHING!!! then this boy named Kaden (he is the most behaved boy in my class and said he wants to marrie me wich i dont want to) Kaden got Nurse Moran and by the time they both go to the classroom Alex had woken up and the weirdest part is that Alex did not remember anything! Then our helper teacher Mrs. Bock (the nicest teacher in the world!) she said to get a book out. but non of us cud pay attention i got freaked out. then he had to go then the princepal came in and said we were the most calm class ever!
THE END!
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PostSubject: Re: A Bodacious Story   Sat Dec 11, 2010 2:13 pm

Chap 2

I ran outside before anyone could catch who I was.
“Call 911!”
“Mom, that girl’s bleeding out of her forehead!”
I ran away.
Isn’t that always what I did?
I felt pathetic.
I kept running, and I got a text on my purple Samsung Strive.
I never got to read it.

I woke up with tons of wires and stuff around me.
“Where am I?” I asked frailly to no one in particular. I felt that my hair was really knotted.
I screamed, and a nurse rushed in.
“She’s awake!”
My mom and dad ran in.
They had GRAY HAIR!
“Oh my Goodness thank GOD YOU’RE AWAKE, Sophie!”
“Yes. Looks like she’s out of that coma…” The nurse said.
COMA?
“Six years and we get to see you again!” My dad was crying. My mom was crying harder.
“WHAT HAPPENED?” I screamed, getting out of bed. I felt claustrophobic from all the wires.
All I remembered was running away from…Isla…
Isla Emmanuel.
“That loser put me here? That fat, ugly pervert?”
My parents were shocked and so was the nurse. “That loser died six years ago, about a week after you went into your coma,” The nurse said.
“She died in the next room.”
The tacky outfit, the horrible hairstyle…
I’d murdered it.
With a glass.
Six years of my life were gone.
Because of her. And she deserved it, that low-life loser.
I smiled. “Let’s go home.”
My parents forgot about what I’d said about Isla, and we asked if I was okay to go home.
“No,” the nurse said. And she made me lay down in bed again. “We have to make sure no brain damage was done. She has to stay here for another week or so.”
My parents sighed. “We’ll visit every day,” my dad said reassuringly.
I hated this.
Oh well, it was just a week.
I thought about school and everything else I’d missed…
Everything else.
“How did I get into a coma anyway?” I asked the nurse when my parents were gone.
“You were running into the street, checking your phone for texts when you got hit by a car.”
That was it.
“Where’s my freaking phone. I want it NOW.”
The nurse held my hand and tears started running down my cheeks.
“When you got hit by the car, it got destroyed. You’d have to go the phone company if you want to know who the text was from, and what it said.”
“I don’t remember anything past the hour I got into a coma.”
It was true.
No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t remember anything.
“Yes, it was stated the doctors thought you had amnesia.”
I broke down in tears.
“All I remember is…”
The nurse got a notepad. I tore it out of her grip and threw it at the wall.
“There’s no way I’m telling you,” I growled.
The nurse looked scared. She left the room, walking fast.
I wondered what was wrong. I looked at the machines to check if my makeup had worn off.
It had, but my eyes were a bright shade of red.
I felt a tap on my back, and when I turned around, I saw Isla.
“Ready to see what really happened?”
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PostSubject: Re: A Bodacious Story   Sat Dec 11, 2010 3:10 pm

This is really good. Although the descriptions are kind of strange, and the word choice could be better, your plots and your characters are wonderful. There is so much suspence, and the story is really realistic, and the descriptions really work for this story. Congrats, Blue.
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PostSubject: Re: A Bodacious Story   Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:20 pm

Amazing. I love it, blue <3
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PostSubject: Re: A Bodacious Story   Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:26 pm

Is that story really true?
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