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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:35 pm

...May I have my own opinion on this?
Great writers love to hear what their readers think so they can make the story better, or explain.

So, maybe you should be more creative on this, because this isn't the first or last story about these topics... I mean, there are tons of stories about a girl in school that likes a guy that they dont even know they 'exist'
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:38 pm

Anaira wrote:
...May I have my own opinion on this?
Great writers love to hear what their readers think so they can make the story better, or explain.

So, maybe you should be more creative on this, because this isn't the first or last story about these topics... I mean, there are tons of stories about a girl in school that likes a guy that they dont even know they 'exist'

Yesh..But this has a twisttttttt
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:41 pm

Okai, Thanks for the feedback!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:44 pm

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Okai, Thanks for the feedback!

Np (; I'm writing chapter three right now xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:52 pm

Beauty26 wrote:
Zezori wrote:
Great job! [:
I have a single question...
Why did it go from "Ash" to "Blue"? o.o

In the second chapter, I'm home..and Blue is the one who thinks I like max...So that's why she texted me. Yupperz xD

P.S My three friends in the story are Blue, Ash, and Straw.

Ohs!
Hahaha i'm stoopid. [:
Anyway nice storie. [:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 2:59 pm

Zezori wrote:
Beauty26 wrote:
Zezori wrote:
Great job! [:
I have a single question...
Why did it go from "Ash" to "Blue"? o.o

In the second chapter, I'm home..and Blue is the one who thinks I like max...So that's why she texted me. Yupperz xD

P.S My three friends in the story are Blue, Ash, and Straw.

Ohs!
Hahaha i'm stoopid. [:
Anyway nice storie. [:

ahaha..Thanks! It's kind of about my life...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:34 pm

awesome story!! cant wait for more!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Feb 25, 2010 5:04 pm

LOVE IT!!!! <333 Absolutely can't wait for more!!!! eep!! yayy! XD Keep it up!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:03 am

~Chapter 3~



“Drip Drop, drip, drip, drop”



It was raining…I looked out my window, and then it suddenly started pouring.

“Ugh! I better find my umbrella…” I screamed at nothing.

I looked at my clock and it was only 5:30…

“5:30?!?”

I forgot that I feel asleep to the blasting music, and that the song reminded me of max.

“Max…” I whispered.

I looked to see if I got any new messages



5 NEW MESSAGES FROM McKenna



Hey gurl! I gotta tell you something important….Call meh!

Hey Booty! Wats taking u so long to call meh?

Boo? Call meh! I gotta tell you somthin IMPORTANT!

Gurl, r u even there?!? HELLOOO? *pokes boo*

Nvm, guess ur not thereeee….Tell u 2moro .-.



I was perplexed at the messages she had sent me, and was still hoping if her phone was even on, so I called her.



RINGGG! RING RING!



I tapped the table with my French manicure, waiting impatiently.



*Beep* “Hello! You reached Strawberry’s phoneee! Hahahha! You like, called at the wrong time, sista! Ahaha Buh byeee! LUV YA Boo! Ahahaha! YUUUUPP! *Beep*



I laughed at her voice message. It was so her.

But I still wondered what she had to tell me…

I went on facebook to see if she was on…

And she was.



Beauty26

Hey straw! (:

McKenna

Yooooo!!!!!! XD

Beauty26

I got your messages….

Mckenna

Ya did? Goooodddd….Cuz I need to tell u sumthin

Beauty26

Okie, what is itttt?

McKenna

Well. Ummm Max, sorta of, um….asked me out….

Beauty26

WHAT?!!?!?!?! Did you say yes!?!?

McKenna

Um…yas -.-

*Beauty26 has logged of on September 9th at 6:08pm



I was frozen in my chair with my eyes blankly staring at my computer screen.

Was this really happening?!?

I pinched myself to make sure



“Owww!”

“Yup, I’m not dreaming”



I really wish I was deaming…

But this was a nightmare that I couldn’t wake up from.



~End of chapter 3~


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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:15 am

awww thats so sad! Sad but great story!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 6:37 am

pinkys wrote:
awww thats so sad! Sad but great story!

Yup, something like this happend to my friend...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:45 am

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Yup, something like this happend to my friend...

Aww, your poor friend. ):
I hope nothing like that ever happens to you... (That is unless it has already. XD)


Anyway, that's really sad...
Nice story anyway. xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:51 am

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Beauty26 wrote:
Yup, something like this happend to my friend...

Aww, your poor friend. ):
I hope nothing like that ever happens to you... (That is unless it has already. XD)


Anyway, that's really sad...
Nice story anyway. xD

Thanks! It didn't happen to me yet xD I hope it never doesssss
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 8:55 am

Beauty26 wrote:
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Beauty26 wrote:
Yup, something like this happend to my friend...

Aww, your poor friend. ):
I hope nothing like that ever happens to you... (That is unless it has already. XD)


Anyway, that's really sad...
Nice story anyway. xD

Thanks! It didn't happen to me yet xD I hope it never doesssss

Well good fur yew!~ xD
Glad it hasn't happened to you yet.
I hope it dun happen to me, either. :p
If it does I'll be a lonely lady with 100 cats! -skips around the room-
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:02 am

Aww Thats Really Sad I Feel Bad I Cant Wait for Chapter 4
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:07 am

~Chapter 4~



My alarm clock went off…

I remember what happened yesterday

And thought it was a dream for a second…

But realized it was reality.



“Sweetie you know you have to go to school sooner or later!” My mom shouted at me.



“How can I when McKenna is a backstabber?!?” I yelled back.



“Honey, she didn’t know you like him…” My mom said in concern.



“I don’t care! All I know is when I walk through the walls of that school; it will be like entering Drama City!!!” Tears started pouring down my rosy cheeks.



“Sweetie…” My mom was really concerned now. You could hear if in her voice.



“I can’t face her, mom, I just lo-”



I swallowed my last words.



It was too scary to even think about.

Tears started pouring down my rosy cheeks.



I ran upstairs, hoping everything was okay, when it wasn’t…



~End of chapter 4~



Sorry it’s so short! xP
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:09 am

Awesome Gif
I Cant Wait For 5
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:10 am

TOO SHORT TOO SHORT. D:<
LOL Jk.
It's aweshome. :3
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:11 am

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TOO SHORT TOO SHORT. D:<
LOL Jk.
It's aweshome. :3

Ahaha xD Thanksssss I wrote it in like 20 mintues! ahahaha
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 9:15 am

Yea its totally awesome maybe you should puplish this its sooo good i mean i really cant wait!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Feb 26, 2010 12:55 pm

Sorry I was so mean xD. I though I was Straw, not McKenna. Did it chage or sumtin? But I LOVE IT!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Sat Mar 06, 2010 5:45 pm

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Sorry I was so mean xD. I though I was Straw, not McKenna. Did it chage or sumtin? But I LOVE IT!

Mckenna is Straw xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Sat Mar 06, 2010 5:51 pm

Beauty26 wrote:
Strawberry2424 wrote:
Sorry I was so mean xD. I though I was Straw, not McKenna. Did it chage or sumtin? But I LOVE IT!

Mckenna is Straw xD

Oh okie.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:12 pm

Guys, keep your eyes peeled for chapter 5; Broken Heart Prom-misses! (:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:15 pm

Beauty26 wrote:
Guys, keep your eyes peeled for chapter 5; Broken Heart Prom-misses! (:

Nice! xD
Can't wait. :>
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