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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:37 pm

coolio, and sharp, its not copying, it doesnt have these things:

1. ghost
2. you
3. alot of other stuff

i'm your friend and all, but this is definatly not copying
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Wed Mar 10, 2010 10:34 pm

OMG!! <3 it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! =D
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Mar 18, 2010 6:49 pm

I'm super busy w/ school and homework chapter 5 is coming out when I'm less busy. Sorreh ):

If you have a dA, I posted the first chapter (: and if you don't know my dA, it's Lyli-Forever (:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:19 pm

Great story! Something like that happened to me at skewl. WHICH I AM OVER (not really Razz)

Can't wait for more, Beauty!

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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:28 am

AWESHUM! Can't wait for Ch.5!

Sorry I'm so mean XD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 10:39 am

Wah I want #5 So bad. Heheh....
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:04 pm

Ric8 wrote:
Wah I want #5 So bad. Heheh....

LOL me too!!! This story is so good!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:05 pm

i know!! me too!! amazing story! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:38 pm

Thanks so much guys! Thank God it's the weekend so I can finally start writing #5 (:
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:22 pm

Beauty26 wrote:
Thanks so much guys! Thank God it's the weekend so I can finally start writing #5 (:

No problem! I can't wait for it!!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:04 pm

~Chapter
5~



~September 11th~





It was supposed to be the most awesome night
of the year; the night of the school dance.



I knew straw wasn’t going to go since she knew
I was going to be there…



Or was she going to be there because she’s
going out with max?



My brain was overloaded with questions; I felt
like it was going to explode.






I looked at my cell phone





INCOMING CALL FROM MCKENNA


“Hello?” I asked nervously, I didn’t know what
she was going to say to me…






“Heyyyy…”


McKenna sounded so calm; like nothing went wrong
Wednesday.






“Listen, Lyli, What was up with you just
leaving the Facebook chat? Were you like mad at me or something?”






“Um, I had to eat dinner..” I lied.


Normally I would just go out and tell the
truth.



But this was different; way different.





“Oh well, tonight’s gonna be a good night!
Hahaha!...”






“Haha yuppp! I’m seriously excited! But you
have to promise it’s gonna be a ladies night! Haha..”






“Ohhhh…” She sounded disappointed; like she
had other plans.






“What?” My heart skipped a beat.





“I was um, sorta thinking of spending the
night with Max at the dance…”






“Oh well then, um I guess there’s always
another dance we can be bestie beez haha!”






But there wasn’t going to…


We’ve known each other since Pre-k and now she
wants to spend the whole night with a guy she’s know for like not even a full
day?!?






“Totally! I’m so glad you understand, Lyli!”





“Yuppp
haha No problam-o! haha…”






“Listen, I gotta go, Bridget and I have to get
dres-“






“Wait WHAT?!!?”





I was getting really pissed now.





“YOU SAID YOU COULDN’T GO TO THE DANCE WITH
ME, BUT NOW YOU CAN GO WITH BRIDGET?!!?”






“Lyli, wait you don’t underst-“





“Have fun at your little prom, backstabber..”





I hung up.





I started crying uncontrollably because I knew
the inconvenient truth...






The thing that will haunt me forever;





I lost my best friend in the world; and she was never coming back…
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:32 pm

OMG SO GOOD! DO CHAPTER 6 PWEASEEEE
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:35 pm

Thats so good! BUT I AM SO HORRIBLEZ! I would neva do that irl XD

But can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:45 pm

Thanks guys! Straw, your character is nothing like you (; Your x10 nicer and a better friend xD

-huggles straw-

I'm writing chapter 6 right now...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:45 pm

Awww thankies Bestie!

-death huggles-

Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:53 pm

great... thx alot for the chapters. if i could, i would rate all of them 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:11 pm

Here is a banner for the next chapter or the rest of the story:

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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:13 pm

awesome! i still can't wait..
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:18 pm

OOO I think I have an idea of what might happen! Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:02 pm

Here is what the story is about:

So it's basically about 4 friends and one boy. Lyli has a MAJOR crush on
him and Bridget suspects that Lyli "loveeeeees" Max and texts Mckenna.
Mckenna doesn't know that Lyli likes Max and thinks it's a rumor since
"Hot" and "Popular" guys are NOT Lyli's type

On facebook, Max asked straw out. She was speechless and said yes. She didn't know it would rip her and Lyli apart.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:10 pm

YAY!! I love your story!! it's awesome!!! eep! *jumps in excitement* ^.~ lol
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:16 pm

This is amazing...this happened to me once...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:36 pm

I LUV CHAPTER 5!!!!!

So sad....
Can't wait 4 chapter 6!

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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:02 am

~Chapter 6~





Moments later I realized that I ended out
friendship.






That I made everything wrong.





That I made my biggest regret.





I glanced at my phone





It was lying there, going off…





“It’s probably McKenna calling, saying that it
was her fault…” I suggested to myself.






I timidly walked over to my phone, scared it
was going to blow up or something.






I flipped it open and it read;





1 MISSED
CALL FROM MCKENNA






A part of me wanted to call her back; while the
other part wanted to run away.






With my hand shaking uncontrollably, I hit CALL





I heard ringing





“Hello…”


It didn’t sound like McKenna, nor did it sound
like a different person.






“Hey McKenna, listen I – I I’m sorry that I
yelled at you an-“






My body was shaking so violently that it
sounded like I was crying






But I was
crying.






“Lyli, I- I’m the one who should be sorry, not
you.”






You could tell that she was crying…





But why was she sorry? I’m the one who
basically ended our friendship, not her.






Then I instantly changed my mind.





It was like a switch in brain went on…





A billion thoughts flooded my brain;








She was the one who stole my crush!


She was the one who was a backstabber!


She was the one who wanted to go with Bridget
to the dance and not me!



But Bridget was the one who told her that I
liked max!






I paused; retraced my thoughts and these 2
thought caught my attention the most;






She was the one who wanted to go with Bridget to the dance and not me!


But Bridget
was the one who told her that I liked max!






I smiled, and then frowned, then cried.





She was tearing us apart.





Not me, and most definitely not McKenna, but
Bridget.






Bridget.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~   Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:12 am

omg i love the story! Its amazing!
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