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Peter Regular Fantagian
Posts : 160 Join date : 2010-01-28 Age : 29 Location : idk, oh no... IM LOST!!
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Wed Mar 10, 2010 8:37 pm | |
| coolio, and sharp, its not copying, it doesnt have these things:
1. ghost 2. you 3. alot of other stuff
i'm your friend and all, but this is definatly not copying | |
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nancydrew12 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 408 Join date : 2010-01-27 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Wed Mar 10, 2010 10:34 pm | |
| OMG!! <3 it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! =D | |
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Lyli Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-01-30 Location : Peegale 5ever (that mean more than 4eva)
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Thu Mar 18, 2010 6:49 pm | |
| I'm super busy w/ school and homework chapter 5 is coming out when I'm less busy. Sorreh ):
If you have a dA, I posted the first chapter (: and if you don't know my dA, it's Lyli-Forever (: | |
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v Moderator
Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:19 pm | |
| Great story! Something like that happened to me at skewl. WHICH I AM OVER (not really ) Can't wait for more, Beauty! | |
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McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:28 am | |
| AWESHUM! Can't wait for Ch.5!
Sorry I'm so mean XD | |
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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 10:39 am | |
| Wah I want #5 So bad. Heheh.... | |
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McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:04 pm | |
| - Ric8 wrote:
- Wah I want #5 So bad. Heheh....
LOL me too!!! This story is so good! | |
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pinkys Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1834 Join date : 2010-01-26
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:05 pm | |
| i know!! me too!! amazing story! | |
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Lyli Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-01-30 Location : Peegale 5ever (that mean more than 4eva)
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:38 pm | |
| Thanks so much guys! Thank God it's the weekend so I can finally start writing #5 (: | |
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McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:22 pm | |
| - Beauty26 wrote:
- Thanks so much guys! Thank God it's the weekend so I can finally start writing #5 (:
No problem! I can't wait for it!! | |
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Lyli Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-01-30 Location : Peegale 5ever (that mean more than 4eva)
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:04 pm | |
| ~Chapter 5~
~September 11th~
It was supposed to be the most awesome night of the year; the night of the school dance.
I knew straw wasn’t going to go since she knew I was going to be there…
Or was she going to be there because she’s going out with max?
My brain was overloaded with questions; I felt like it was going to explode.
I looked at my cell phone
INCOMING CALL FROM MCKENNA
“Hello?” I asked nervously, I didn’t know what she was going to say to me…
“Heyyyy…”
McKenna sounded so calm; like nothing went wrong Wednesday.
“Listen, Lyli, What was up with you just leaving the Facebook chat? Were you like mad at me or something?”
“Um, I had to eat dinner..” I lied.
Normally I would just go out and tell the truth.
But this was different; way different.
“Oh well, tonight’s gonna be a good night! Hahaha!...”
“Haha yuppp! I’m seriously excited! But you have to promise it’s gonna be a ladies night! Haha..”
“Ohhhh…” She sounded disappointed; like she had other plans.
“What?” My heart skipped a beat.
“I was um, sorta thinking of spending the night with Max at the dance…”
“Oh well then, um I guess there’s always another dance we can be bestie beez haha!”
But there wasn’t going to…
We’ve known each other since Pre-k and now she wants to spend the whole night with a guy she’s know for like not even a full day?!?
“Totally! I’m so glad you understand, Lyli!”
“Yuppp haha No problam-o! haha…”
“Listen, I gotta go, Bridget and I have to get dres-“
“Wait WHAT?!!?”
I was getting really pissed now.
“YOU SAID YOU COULDN’T GO TO THE DANCE WITH ME, BUT NOW YOU CAN GO WITH BRIDGET?!!?”
“Lyli, wait you don’t underst-“
“Have fun at your little prom, backstabber..”
I hung up.
I started crying uncontrollably because I knew the inconvenient truth...
The thing that will haunt me forever;
I lost my best friend in the world; and she was never coming back… | |
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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:32 pm | |
| OMG SO GOOD! DO CHAPTER 6 PWEASEEEE | |
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McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:35 pm | |
| Thats so good! BUT I AM SO HORRIBLEZ! I would neva do that irl XD
But can't wait for more! | |
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Lyli Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-01-30 Location : Peegale 5ever (that mean more than 4eva)
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:45 pm | |
| Thanks guys! Straw, your character is nothing like you (; Your x10 nicer and a better friend xD
-huggles straw-
I'm writing chapter 6 right now... | |
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McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:45 pm | |
| Awww thankies Bestie!
-death huggles-
Can't wait for more! | |
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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 2:53 pm | |
| great... thx alot for the chapters. if i could, i would rate all of them 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 | |
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Lyli Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-01-30 Location : Peegale 5ever (that mean more than 4eva)
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:11 pm | |
| Here is a banner for the next chapter or the rest of the story: | |
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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:13 pm | |
| awesome! i still can't wait.. | |
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McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 3:18 pm | |
| OOO I think I have an idea of what might happen! Can't wait for more! | |
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Lyli Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-01-30 Location : Peegale 5ever (that mean more than 4eva)
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:02 pm | |
| Here is what the story is about:
So it's basically about 4 friends and one boy. Lyli has a MAJOR crush on him and Bridget suspects that Lyli "loveeeeees" Max and texts Mckenna. Mckenna doesn't know that Lyli likes Max and thinks it's a rumor since "Hot" and "Popular" guys are NOT Lyli's type
On facebook, Max asked straw out. She was speechless and said yes. She didn't know it would rip her and Lyli apart. | |
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nancydrew12 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 408 Join date : 2010-01-27 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 5:10 pm | |
| YAY!! I love your story!! it's awesome!!! eep! *jumps in excitement* ^.~ lol | |
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Bluerivers1 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 461 Join date : 2010-02-06 Location : ojfirhfirghugb
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:16 pm | |
| This is amazing...this happened to me once... | |
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v Moderator
Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Fri Mar 19, 2010 6:36 pm | |
| I LUV CHAPTER 5!!!!! So sad.... Can't wait 4 chapter 6! | |
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Lyli Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1149 Join date : 2010-01-30 Location : Peegale 5ever (that mean more than 4eva)
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:02 am | |
| ~Chapter 6~
Moments later I realized that I ended out friendship.
That I made everything wrong.
That I made my biggest regret.
I glanced at my phone
It was lying there, going off…
“It’s probably McKenna calling, saying that it was her fault…” I suggested to myself.
I timidly walked over to my phone, scared it was going to blow up or something.
I flipped it open and it read;
1 MISSED CALL FROM MCKENNA
A part of me wanted to call her back; while the other part wanted to run away.
With my hand shaking uncontrollably, I hit CALL
I heard ringing
“Hello…”
It didn’t sound like McKenna, nor did it sound like a different person.
“Hey McKenna, listen I – I I’m sorry that I yelled at you an-“
My body was shaking so violently that it sounded like I was crying
But I was crying.
“Lyli, I- I’m the one who should be sorry, not you.”
You could tell that she was crying…
But why was she sorry? I’m the one who basically ended our friendship, not her.
Then I instantly changed my mind.
It was like a switch in brain went on…
A billion thoughts flooded my brain;
She was the one who stole my crush!
She was the one who was a backstabber!
She was the one who wanted to go with Bridget to the dance and not me!
But Bridget was the one who told her that I liked max!
I paused; retraced my thoughts and these 2 thought caught my attention the most;
She was the one who wanted to go with Bridget to the dance and not me!
But Bridget was the one who told her that I liked max!
I smiled, and then frowned, then cried.
She was tearing us apart.
Not me, and most definitely not McKenna, but Bridget.
Bridget. | |
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ashley123 Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1934 Join date : 2010-01-27 Age : 111
| Subject: Re: ~Blindfold -a Love story~ Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:12 am | |
| omg i love the story! Its amazing! | |
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