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crazychris99
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PostSubject: Some Fanfiction, Lance's Adventure Chapter 1   Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:33 am

Hey guys, you probably don't know this, but I love to write stories, and I'm pretty good at it too! Construction criticism, please!
Time period is around the Dark Ages/



Lance's Adventure Chapter 1


"Why, why did this happen?" Lance muttered to himself. Lance was a secret agent for an organization called the KOC, the Knights of Camelot. He had recently been captured by the king of a neighboring kingdom, Artannica. They had been at a secret war for over 200 years, and when Camelot began to get the upper hand, the Artannic king, King Lester had his men capture Lance, the best agent. "Come get your food, scum," insulted the guard. Lance had gotten used to the name calling, they had a new insult every day. "Coming, Ricardo," said Lance. He stood up and walked over to his cell door, grabbing the mush from between the bars. The guard walked away, as Lance put the mush on a piece of loose stone on the floor. He had figured out that the mush was an acid, and it could eat through stone, a little at a time. He grinned. "Soon, I'll be rid of this place."
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FreedoM 4EVA
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PostSubject: Re: Some Fanfiction, Lance's Adventure Chapter 1   Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:37 am

Looking forward for more.
Great beginning.

Camelot--- Reminded me of Grade 6, learning about King Arthur.
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PostSubject: Re: Some Fanfiction, Lance's Adventure Chapter 1   Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:58 pm

I like it!
Artannica kind of reminds me of Antartica
Knights of Camelot I just love that name! =)
Looking for more of your great story.
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PostSubject: Re: Some Fanfiction, Lance's Adventure Chapter 1   Sat Feb 05, 2011 2:34 pm

Awesome! Hoping for MORE! ;D
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