| | Contest of Characters | |
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+6Magdaleena Nakira Makkine S nymphie Oliver 10 posters |
So, which one is better? | Ichiga (Sealand's character) | | 46% | [ 6 ] | Sapphire (Nymphie's character) | | 54% | [ 7 ] |
| Total Votes : 13 | | Poll closed |
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Oliver Moderator
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| Subject: Contest of Characters Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:30 pm | |
| So, Poland, Nymphie, Italy, and me made these characters, and we want to know which ones better. Be honest please! - Nymphie:
My name is Sapphire gorgeous sparkly fairy princess unicorn Lindon.My mother died 6 minutes after i was born.I stared at her and she exploded because of my beauty.When I was 11 I was whisked to Hogwarts after living a horrid back story in which I lived with my great aunt Sam and her dog Hercules the pit bull. When i came there i was to perfect to be in a Hogwarts house so they named one after me so I could be in it .Sometimes i fill in for all the professors.I have a boyfriend named Shadow dark Blade.I also have several other boys wrapped around my skinny pale finger.I can also fly without a broom I can just fly.
I am also the best quiddicth player on the team and play every position on the team.I also have a goth sister named Raven darkness universe killer Lindon.I also have a pet unicorn named Samantha.I ride on her to herbology everyday.I graduated from Hogwarts when i was 14 years old because i was MUCH too smart.
Currently I am the minister of magic in 14 different countries and I am currently married to Shadow and we have 4 kids named Bella,Damion,Scarlet,and Xavier.Not to mention I am a multi billionaire and own 34 different houses in several countries.I personally think my life sucks and i have a horrid character flaw I snort laugh.Isn't that ghastly!Well i got to go ride unicorns and defeat evil stuff bye!
- Sealand:
LOL HAI GAIS my name issss Ichiga Naruta Raven Sparkle Sasuka Bella Madeline Darkness Cotton Alexandria Shadow Miki Rin Koizumi Potter Vampire Riddle Apple Weasley Cheer Snape Depression Hollow Izumi. I was born in Tokyo, Japan, and was given birth by Tom Riddle and Sasuke. (Authors note: SASOOKEE WAS OVIOUSLY THE UKE LOL DOOOOHH!1!!!!!111) I am pure blooded becaz Sasuke is also a wizard lol. So laik, I went to a bordin skewl 4 da furst 3 years of mai laif it was caled “Bording skewl of deth” and mai bros albus and james both mad foon of meh 4 having slanty aiz butt jaims srctly had a croosh on me. when i wz 5 i was sent to Hogwats caz i was soo talented lol. I got sort into slytherin but i got 2 sliip in da rum of the headmaster caz he laved me. so I slept with him lol. ten i fooundd outt i was a vamp it was so damatric but i found out wen i sparkled lol. i was so guud at all the subjez, when i was alaven the hedmasetre was killed lol so i become de new hedmaster and i taugt all the classes. wen ai was 13 i fel in lav with a emo warewelf he was emo laik me and we could relate 2 eech otar lol “konichiwa Darkrai-san” is all i tell him lol “bonjour ichiga-san “ and we fell in lav and then we wer so happy but our lav was forbidden!!!!!1!1111112!!11 so laik we wer haiding in the owl thing until ai was 16 and ten he was a traitor and gat me pregnant!!11!11!1 So i was s o sad i tot he would undersatnd so i cut myself so many times and i was like whaiiiiiiii darkrai whii and he said “baka” and i said “URUSAI!!11!1!!11” and then a rlly smexy guy comes and his name is ricardo panchez and he has the pretiest har ever and abs so we fel in lav and he totali undetsttoood tat ai was pregnant and was “hau cuud somewan do somethin like that?”?”
so i had the baby they were twins boy and boy and they were named Ying aand Yang loll so now we all leev together in tokio japan and we lav eech other and ying and yang are forbidden love 2gether lol! but they married 2 and i still look like im 16 im hot -the end
- Poland:
Her name is Mary, and she's a muggle-born. Um... Once, like, she was all segregated and such, because she was muggle born and she's from New York, I think (AN: I'm also from NY, and it's really nice. Go here, we have T-shirts!!) and so, like, she went to England and was segregated for being so nice and like, muggle-born? And Draco Malfoy hated her, but he's just Tsundere even though once he did, like, black magic, but he has an excuse. I mean, Draco was bullied by his abusive father, so... um, I'm mature, I guess, because I have themes like these!!!! Also, uh... She's really ugly, she has big glasses and mousy brown hair and medium-sized round things (again: Mature, this isn't one of those freaky fanfics) and uh... Everyone says she's pretty because they're under a spell from voldemriou who's tryin 2 kill her!! but then hp was all killing voldie, and... uh... well, she was all emo bcuz hp died, but in relity hp was in her heart all alogn!!!!11 abd then, like, uh... she cut hrslfandcommitedsuicide. and then HER TEACHER WAS A JERK AND EVERYONE VULLIED HR @ ScUL BECAUSE SHE TURND IN2 A GHOST WASN'T HR FAOLT!!!11!!!!!11!!! I SWER! ANDSHEDIDN'TLETD WHITE GUY TAKE D BUS SEAT. AT THE END
- Italy:
My name is Bella Goose, and I am related to Bella Swan. I am sporty, smart, out going, intelligent, nice, popular, pretty, loveable, interesting, adored, praised, worshipped, did I mention pretty, sexy, hot, meow, yah. My name is also Yuki- chan. I live in japan, new york, paris, and like cool places all at once. I was hired by a modeling company at like age 3, and i'm the face of cover girl, and like 302098 other modelling comapnies, yeah. I went to hogwarts, like duh, and 09384092 other wizard schools, and harry was like totally my bf for a while, but he got too emotional. I won the nobel peace prize btw. and I like rock at everything. yeah. I HAVE A DIPLOMA IN EVERYTHING~! And boys they keep liek following me around and i can't get rid of dem and its annoying. I can breath underwater too. and i'm won the olympics, i won them, gold medal in every category. and I own Sealand. and im' rich and i have golden roses and i won like 3948209384029384029384 02984 contests and like i'm the president. Yes. and anyways i liek grew up in a super big house wit a pool and servants and stuffs and yeah. and it was tough. then i went to school wit normal kids cuz daddies business was havn issues. then it got bettr. thn whn i grad8td from college like every company wnted me. it wz so hrd to pick wht job i wantd. I hv a husband named edward cullen, i stol him from my sis bella , sorry bella, but i gave him anti depressants so ish all good. yah. we haz a kid who won mrs. america at age 0.23 btw. an i invented computers. and google, and yahoo, and youtube, and i invented mace, but it wuz on accident. experiment gone bad, but that was cuz someone hit me wit a pan whil i was doin it. :[ it hurt. den i got bettar in like 3 seconds and hit dem with a pan. 8D
be honest!
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| | | nymphie Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 769 Join date : 2010-09-11 Age : 24 Location : Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Tue Feb 08, 2011 9:54 pm | |
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| | | S Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1417 Join date : 2010-02-06 Age : 19 Location : sad town
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:01 pm | |
| pSSHT. I liked your character. | |
| | | Makkine Moderator
Posts : 2772 Join date : 2010-05-17 Age : 26 Location : Woah
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:06 pm | |
| ...And nobody liked mine. But yeah, mine was boring and more of a psychological analysis of the suethor rather than a character. It's my least favourite too, actually. XD
My personal favourite has to be either HPF's or my sister's. I think Byakku was trying too hard, actually. | |
| | | nymphie Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 769 Join date : 2010-09-11 Age : 24 Location : Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:23 pm | |
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| | | Nakira Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1137 Join date : 2010-07-12 Age : 27 Location : the groan zone
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Tue Feb 08, 2011 11:09 pm | |
| I can't decide, they're all so deep and original and REAL, know what I'm sayinnnnn'? /shotshot | |
| | | Magdaleena Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2261 Join date : 2010-04-26 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere in northern Europe. Probably hours ahead of you.
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 8:06 am | |
| You say I should be honest?
Okayyy... Nymphie, Italy and Sealand's characters were all total Mary-Sues. Poland's is an Anti-Sue, the kind of character you get when you try too hard to not make it a Mary-Sue. Neither Mary-Sues or Anti-Sues get on my favorite character list, soooo... However, I did crack up while reading about them all. xD
I think you all were just having fun and joking while you all were making them, right?
Were I being too serious here? ._. | |
| | | S Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1417 Join date : 2010-02-06 Age : 19 Location : sad town
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 12:10 pm | |
| PSSSHT WHAT? SHE WUZ NAWT TRYIN' 2 HARD WHEN SHE MADE ME. I'M JUST SOOO AWSOMZ. AN LAIK SMART.
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| | | Makkine Moderator
Posts : 2772 Join date : 2010-05-17 Age : 26 Location : Woah
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 4:18 pm | |
| No, guys, this is a Sue contest. XD. I'm happy that my sarcasm is more obvious than my sister's, though, because nobody gets my sarcasm and that makes me smad.
It was originally only between HPF and sis, although then Byakku joined and then I joined because, as I'm sure I've mentioned before, I'm a mindless sheep with a slightly creepy attraction to bandwagons. XD | |
| | | Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 5:18 pm | |
| As much as they were all nice and all... None of them seemed real.Being a wizard,Having a degree in everything,Being hated by...DRACO MALFOY???as much as i like the creativity that i am sure you guys tried to shoot for the unoriginality stuck out so much.(now that i think about it creativity and originality kinda seem to twine together)
The idea of using the obvious school that Harry Potter had gone to though was cute to use was unoriginal.Being a wizard that's absolutely perfect In looks is a bit overwhelming for a character and being related to Bella Swan i find distasteful (probably because i now hate twilight ) also when u connect vampires to sparkling it angers me (reason 1 that i hate twilight )
All of your characters are too perfect which,in my opinion,Takes away some color from the story.Was Harry Potter perfect?No.Was Bella Swan perfect?No.Was Edward Cullen perfect?No not really he has a few flaws.Don't you see though having a seemingly perfect character is fun it can bore the reader and hint clues about the ending.
As much as i loved the Harry Potter series Using J.K Rowling's ideas would never be a good thing to do if these characters were in your own book.Since that's not the case i give you some slack...Some.Knowing all of you I can safely say that you are all very creative when it comes to these things you can easily come out on top.
Enough with my possibly worthless critique.
For most cute...Nymphies character
for most real...Polands character
For most grown-up funny...Sealands character
for most prestigious character....Italys character
sorry if my critique is some what offensive or wrong i can't make a perfect critique and not everyone will agree with me sorry in advance. | |
| | | nymphie Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 769 Join date : 2010-09-11 Age : 24 Location : Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 5:32 pm | |
| do you know what a mary-sue is it is a character overly perfect.Thus we are making fun of them | |
| | | Relora Hero Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 5:36 pm | |
| oh o.k didn't know that lol of course that mary-sue thing sounds very familiar probably since i haven't wrote a good story for 3 years (darn u writers block!)Thnx for the the info u let me relearn the thing about mary-sue :-) | |
| | | nymphie Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 769 Join date : 2010-09-11 Age : 24 Location : Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 8:26 pm | |
| its nothing no big deal so now which one do you like?
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| | | Makkine Moderator
Posts : 2772 Join date : 2010-05-17 Age : 26 Location : Woah
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:00 pm | |
| Hey guys, should we do a serious character contest? Not that I'll enter (My characters=fail), but I'd like to see your entries, and perhaps we could make it a drawing contest, tooo... *Runs off and forgets what she was talking about* | |
| | | Magdaleena Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2261 Join date : 2010-04-26 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere in northern Europe. Probably hours ahead of you.
| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Thu Feb 10, 2011 8:20 am | |
| - Poland wrote:
- Hey guys, should we do a serious character contest? Not that I'll enter (My characters=fail), but I'd like to see your entries, and perhaps we could make it a drawing contest, tooo... *Runs off and forgets what she was talking about*
Noo, your characters aren't fail. Mine are. But this does sound like fun. Will it be an open contest for everyone to join?
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| | | bladerunner22 Devoted Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Thu Feb 10, 2011 9:09 am | |
| - Poland wrote:
- Hey guys, should we do a serious character contest? Not that I'll enter (My characters=fail), but I'd like to see your entries, and perhaps we could make it a drawing contest, tooo... *Runs off and forgets what she was talking about*
Yeah, let's! I could draw and make a description. XD | |
| | | Makkine Moderator
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| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:48 pm | |
| Of course it's open for everyone! Ok, I'll make the topic now. | |
| | | Angus Bethune Loyal Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:54 pm | |
| I can't draw is bases okay? | |
| | | Relora Hero Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Fri Feb 11, 2011 5:23 pm | |
| @nymphie
idk they all were pretty good...I guess Italys character | |
| | | Forever Forgotten Senior Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Contest of Characters Fri Feb 11, 2011 7:40 pm | |
| I have to be honest. I liked Italy's and Nymphire's. | |
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