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Lyli
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PostSubject: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:35 pm

A possible story. Yup.

Oh, and I have no name for it yet xD

Spoiler:
 


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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:48 pm

Woah, this is an awesome story! Very suspenseful!
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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:40 pm

Wow this makes wonder what will happen next! Please go on with your story! =]
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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:52 pm

really nice story
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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:13 am

Wow, this is pretty good. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:00 am

Thanks...and I just realized there was a typo. Smh.
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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:57 am

Very nice job! Continue it! I wanna see more!
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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:19 am

Very nice but (this is only my opinion don't have to listen to me at all)The first paragraph seemed somewhat choppy and repetitive with some words that's just what i think.
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PostSubject: Re: A possible story that I wrote :3   Sun Feb 13, 2011 12:55 pm

Its really great and wonderful.
If you are planning of completing it, then please do.
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