Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: The corner gate Tue Apr 05, 2011 4:02 pm | |
| - Prologue:
Fresh salty wet tear drizzled down Lora's face as they entered her cozy neighbor hood.She glanced at Fredrick,her sweet yet sad husband,his nice black tuxedo flashing with tears from the gloomy clouded daylight.She then felt another surge of sadness creep up on her and another soaking wave of tears over came her.she kept shuddering and she heard Fredrick sniffle.Her little baby was gone she kept thinking over and over again.she looked at her black satin dress her little baby had bought her she loved it so much and it was ruined with her dry sullen tears."He's gone" she whispered as they approached their road.Her husband,Fredrick,nodded sadly as two moving trucks passed them. As they approached their driveway a little sign glowed a gloomy yellow with the word "sold" in big black eye-catching letters written across it.The two moving trucks that had passed them earlier on were at the house to the right of them where the sign was posted.By the trucks was a small ford Taurus.Out stepped a fine young man in his late twenties.He had nut-brown hair and sparking hazel eyes.He wore some gray slacks with black loafers and a white collared shirt.He had a blinding cheerful white smile with small smile wrinkles surrounding his facial features. He walked around as if he was king but he was very friendly in manner he seemed to joke with the moving men for a second laughing with them and offering help.The moving men declined the offer,smiled and got back to work.The young man still smiling waltzed back to his car towards the passenger seat.Opening the door he helped a young woman of his age step out.She had jet-black hair and dazzling forest green eyes.She was slightly curvy and wore much simpler clothes with flip-flops.But more amazing was she was pregnant.Her belly swelled with life.She ,as well, had a movie-star mile and nipped playful at her husbands neck.He smiled,enticed by her actions. "Fredrick?"lora said a little less unhappy. "yes dear?"he replied to his wife. "lets get cleaned up I would like to meet are new neighbors."they drove into their driveway walked inside got redressed and half-walked half-trudged to there new neighbors home.
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Monsterbunny Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1425 Join date : 2010-12-11 Age : 24 Location : Behind you
| Subject: Re: The corner gate Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:27 pm | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: The corner gate Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:33 pm | |
| aww thnx i was hoping it would be good for a first draft and all I have a few mistakes but nothing to hard to fix | |
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