Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: I made a song! Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:56 pm | |
| Rate please!
Why does the world. Have Heaven and H-ll (I know it aint swaer word but I dont wanna say it) We look, at the bright side of this world. Why cant it all be like that? The little birds singing songs. I would stare at them, all day long. But now I must say goodbye. I had a really good time. Off to a better place I go… Go ahead! Strech my wings! Make me fly, id like to see you try.. Melodys stuck in my head…. You made them up with me… I dont know whats wrong… It came so suddenly… I dont know why I felll….. Now that your spirits next to mine. I see your energy…. Crying….. And now that your energys gone… Whats my purpose? Goodnightt….. Have fun…. Good time. | |
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McKenna Former Staff
Posts : 3165 Join date : 2010-01-27
| Subject: Re: I made a song! Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:22 pm | |
| Thats really good! It's kinda short though. But other than that I think it is really good! 10/10 | |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: I made a song! Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:24 pm | |
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cupcakey New Fantagian
Posts : 9 Join date : 2010-03-05
| Subject: Re: I made a song! Fri Mar 05, 2010 5:02 pm | |
| it's more of a poem than a song, but besides that, it's lovely. | |
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pinkys Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1834 Join date : 2010-01-26
| Subject: Re: I made a song! Fri Mar 05, 2010 5:04 pm | |
| wow thats relli good! can't wait to actually hear it xD somehow | |
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