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Oliver
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PostSubject: I made a song!   Thu Mar 04, 2010 5:56 pm

Rate please!


Why does the world.
Have Heaven and H-ll (I know it aint swaer word but I dont wanna say it)
We look, at the bright side of this world.
Why cant it all be like that?
The little birds singing songs.
I would stare at them, all day long.
But now I must say goodbye.
I had a really good time.
Off to a better place I go…
Go ahead! Strech my wings!
Make me fly, id like to see you try..
Melodys stuck in my head….
You made them up with me…
I dont know whats wrong…
It came so suddenly…
I dont know why I felll…..
Now that your spirits next to mine.
I see your energy….
Crying…..
And now that your energys gone…
Whats my purpose?
Goodnightt…..
Have fun….
Good time.
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PostSubject: Re: I made a song!   Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:22 pm

Thats really good! It's kinda short though. But other than that I think it is really good! 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: I made a song!   Thu Mar 04, 2010 6:24 pm

yeah, I might edit it.

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PostSubject: Re: I made a song!   Fri Mar 05, 2010 5:02 pm

it's more of a poem than a song, but besides that, it's lovely.
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PostSubject: Re: I made a song!   Fri Mar 05, 2010 5:04 pm

wow thats relli good! can't wait to actually hear it xD somehow
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