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Relora
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PostSubject: Corner Gate   Wed May 11, 2011 3:02 pm

Decided to try and give another go at writing publicly

Intro:
 

chapter 1, 6 years later:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Wed May 11, 2011 5:16 pm

this sucks balls
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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Fri May 13, 2011 3:27 pm

I respect your some what rude opinion but unlike some immature people this does not make me upset for the world is full of disappointments and it seems to be yet another one posted above my comment and yours but I am sticking with this and I am gonna improve through my mistakes even if you shoot it down with "this sucks balls" comments for I am one that does not quit when those around me doubt me.

Also if you wanna help this problematic story, as I believe you see it, what had I done wrong and how may I improve this?
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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Fri May 13, 2011 3:37 pm

That... That is so sad... yet so beautiful!!
I really liked it! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Fri May 13, 2011 3:45 pm

Thanks ^^ I was really hoping I was doing o.k. 'cause this is the first somewhat sad story i have ever had cross my mind.

btw your profile picture recolors are very nice ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Fri May 13, 2011 3:47 pm

Thanks! :3
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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Fri May 13, 2011 6:40 pm

Relora wrote:
I respect your some what rude opinion but unlike some immature people this does not make me upset for the world is full of disappointments and it seems to be yet another one posted above my comment and yours but I am sticking with this and I am gonna improve through my mistakes even if you shoot it down with "this sucks balls" comments for I am one that does not quit when those around me doubt me.

Also if you wanna help this problematic story, as I believe you see it, what had I done wrong and how may I improve this?
I lol'd

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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Fri May 13, 2011 7:00 pm

That was really good! I'd like to read more of it! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Corner Gate   Sat May 14, 2011 9:35 am

Chapter 1 is up :-P
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