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Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Beautiful Death~[Story] Sat Mar 26, 2011 9:45 pm | |
| Chapter 1: Doctors, or Demons?- Spoiler:
[indent]Flying great distances caused great pain to the grim reaper in labor, but it was worth it. Haji was about to give birth to a newborn creature. As she arrived to the human hospital, Haji changed into human form so she could get in. When in human form she was beautiful, too beautiful. Her cruel eyes resembled the color of roses, and her nose was arched evenly, not too flat, not too pointy. Her mouth was always curved in a faint smile with blood red lips, but in the inside she had always had hatred in herself, and couldn't wait to give birth to one of her own, another cold-blooded creature. [indent]"Hello miss, what are you in need of tonight?" the male doctor in front of her asked politely, as if he had no idea she was about to give birth. [indent]"Can't you see I'm pregnant, and my water broke!" She rasped, but to the man she sounded kind and in need. [indent]"Yes, come this way." the doctor said. He took her to a wheel chair and assisted her through the hallways into a room with a kind-looking nurse inside. The nurse led her to where she was supposed to change into a maternity dress. The male doctor left and Haji proceeded with everything she had to do before doing any of the real giving-birth part. Secretly she knew that the nurse was one of her own, but just in case, Haji took out her hand gun she always keeps in her purse, silently put spells around the room to make it sound-resistant and shot the nurse in the brain while the nurse wasn't looking. Seeing it didn't seem to effect her in any way, Haji sat on the foam hospital bed and started breathing unevenly and swallowing the pain, knowing her baby was on her way. Chapter 2: How is this... my child?(Skipping all the giving birth parts... I can't really explain that.) - Spoiler:
[indent]Haji looked at the nurse, who seemed to be staring in great interest to the newborn baby. When reaper children are born, they are born looking grotesque all over. Usually they have the normal human skin tone, but it's eyes are black and when you open their mouth they already have a set of teeth, but fangs are included. They don't cry when they are born, and have a strong odor also. Haji sniffed, and the air seemed normal. She was afraid of what might have happened, by the questioning face of the nurse. [indent]"I-is everything alright?" Haji asked, with actual fear in her voice, for it wasn't normal for such suspense to be in the room when the doctor is one of your own, and you have just given birth. [indent]"Well, miss... It's just that, well, I can't explain. Look for yourself." said the nurse, face turning red, being ashamed. She turned the baby facing her mother, and what she saw didn't match the description of a newborn at all. Terror rose into Haji's face, great fear overcame her and she didn't bear to look at what had came out of her body. The thing she saw was not anything close to a reaper. There laid a red curious face, hazel brown eyes and a little grin on the baby's face. No pearly whites were laid upon the human's mouth, and suddenly it started crying. [indent]"What... What is that thing. That couldn't have came out of my body. It can't have!" Haji shrieked in disgust. Shame poured over herself and she felt like screaming to her master, what is going on here! Haji couldn't bear it. She just couldn't. What's wrong with her? How did that creature, thing, human, come out of her own body? She was scared. For the first time in her afterlife, she was scared. Chapter 3: Pretty Woman- Spoiler:
[indent]Facing a woman in her early thirties was this adorable baby in a deeply embroidered violet basket with black and red floral patterned blankets covering her. On the back of the baby's right hand were writing that were only legible to Reapers, so it meant nothing to the pretty woman. The woman had blonde hair with kind and loving blue-green eyes. Her lips were lightly highlighted with a dazzling light pink, and her hair was tied in a tight bun. Her name was Ren. Ren's loving eyes laid upon the newborn baby, making the baby feel warm inside. [indent]"Hallo you wittle cutie pie!" Ren gushed in 'baby talk' to the unknown newborn. "Where'd you come from? What's your name?" she asked, and lightly pinched the baby's nose. As if saying an answer, the baby beamed and tapped her belly. The lady opened her blankets, looked at where the baby tapped and there laid a note. The note read,
Greetings,
[indent]My baby's name is Migoto Shinu. You will notice that it is tattooed to the back of her right hand, but the writing is not legible to you. Migoto was born on October 31st, 1999. Exactly 11 years from now I will send another note saying Migoto's purpose of this world, and you will tell her exactly what I say. Also, when the time is right, show her this letter. You will know when that is. Make me proud, Ren.
Sincerely, Anonymous
___________________________________________________________ October 28th, 2010 Chapter 4: Hysterics
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| | | pokeranger Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5454 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : Loading...
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:44 pm | |
| It's so descriptive for your age! I luff it! <3 As a beginning, that is. | |
| | | Kensharma Junior Fantagian
Posts : 63 Join date : 2011-03-20 Age : 28 Location : Behind you, duh...
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:45 pm | |
| I will have to read this...later...lol. | |
| | | Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Sun Mar 27, 2011 5:12 pm | |
| Chapter 2 is posted! How twisted. Cx | |
| | | pokeranger Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5454 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : Loading...
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Sun Mar 27, 2011 6:17 pm | |
| Aww.. you don't get embarassed about your baby you gave birth to. BE PROUD! <3 Question, how'd she get pregnant? | |
| | | Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:13 pm | |
| Making Chapter 3 right now(: I'll edit this when it's posted.C: | |
| | | Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:25 pm | |
| - pokeranger wrote:
- It's so descriptive for your age! I luff it! <3 As a beginning, that is.
WELL.. UM EH.. SHE.. UM.. GOT A HUSBAND.. AND UH.... THIS IS AKWARD | |
| | | Karen Former Staff
Posts : 1530 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 24 Location : unicorns
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Mon Mar 28, 2011 8:38 pm | |
| Chapter 3 is posted. ;D Sorry I'm sort of rushing through parts, this beginning wasn't really the concept of the story. The real concept is - SPOILERALERTSPOILERBEEPBEEPBEEP!!!!!!!!!!
Fine I won't tell. >w< | |
| | | Olivia New Fantagian
Posts : 3 Join date : 2011-04-10
| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:33 pm | |
| Awesome! I love it!
<3 Olivia Love 2 dance I ♥ music!!! ╔══╗ ♫ ║██║ ♫ ║(o)♫ ╚══╝
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| | | Emily New Fantagian
Posts : 14 Join date : 2011-04-11 Location : NO 1 SHALL KNOW
| | | | Emily New Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Beautiful Death~[Story] Wed Apr 13, 2011 5:25 pm | |
| hey piano how far are you in to writing it? I WANT TO READ MORE MORE MORE!!! | |
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