Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT)

Subject: Re: Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT) Sat May 21, 2011 7:38 am

@ Rock N Roll- Free is right. Never delete a post. It's just that your prologue has some grammar mistakes. We are trying to make it more interesting to the readers. And you have to show, not tell.

Subject: Re: Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT) Sat May 21, 2011 11:51 am

Aw. I wanted to read it...
But you deleted it... oh well.

Subject: Re: Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT) Fri May 27, 2011 3:17 pm

NERD RAGE!!!!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT) Sun May 29, 2011 11:44 pm

Tch, I'm taking this WILL get thirty posts since you guys will keep bickering.

Subject: Re: Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT) Mon May 30, 2011 1:56 am

I guess so. But why thirty posts exactly? We're talking for no reason on something that hasn't been out yet.

Subject: Re: Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT) Sat Jun 04, 2011 4:19 pm

ge wizz
you dont have to get all mad at us for you not getting wat you want
your not always going to get what you want
either make the story or get on with your life
and it can become a book someday
but besides that we didnt tell you to make the story
your the one that posted it and wanted 30 posts
but really 30 posts
how would you react if someone said that?
i think you would take it so good..
well we didnt either

Subject: Re: Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT) Sat Jun 04, 2011 10:49 pm

egads, can we please get on with it or at least, stop it? Where is the author?

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