Prologue to a chilling story. (NOT)

@ Rock N Roll- Free is right. Never delete a post. It's just that your prologue has some grammar mistakes. We are trying to make it more interesting to the readers. And you have to show, not tell.

Aw. I wanted to read it...
But you deleted it... oh well.

NERD RAGE!!!!!!!!!!

Tch, I'm taking this WILL get thirty posts since you guys will keep bickering.

I guess so. But why thirty posts exactly? We're talking for no reason on something that hasn't been out yet.

ge wizz
you dont have to get all mad at us for you not getting wat you want
your not always going to get what you want
either make the story or get on with your life
and it can become a book someday
but besides that we didnt tell you to make the story
your the one that posted it and wanted 30 posts
but really 30 posts
how would you react if someone said that?
i think you would take it so good..
well we didnt either

egads, can we please get on with it or at least, stop it? Where is the author?