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PostSubject: le woosh   Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:33 pm

Anyone like Shugo Chara?
Anyway, this is my W.I.P.(wip means WORK, IN PROGRESS.) So don't ask me why stuff is missing, etc.


Don't rate. Don't tell me how to improve. I'm not looking for any of that.
thanks(:
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:36 pm

Hm, I shall give constructive criticism.

The eyes are too far apart.
You need to work on the shading.
Nose?
Legs look a little short.

Other than that, I think it's quite nice. it's just a work in progress, yes I know.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:48 pm


-I think the eyes look okay maybe a bit closer and maybe a bit higher on the face,but no ones perfect.Even in the world or art.So I don't find that to bad.
-This is a work in progress so I understand the lack of shading.
-There is a nose I just noticed it's just one of the flat line ones.
-The legs are a bit short in proportion to the body you might want to fix it before you finish it all.

Other than that it's very nice I can't wait to see it when it's finished.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:49 pm

WHAT DID I TELL YOU---
DO NONE PEOPLE READ?!
Lol. just kidding.
1. I tried to put the eyes in the best way possible, but since the face is small thats the closest I can make them without looking like she was in a nuclear bomb attack.
2. Shading? I haven't even colored it yet.
3. Nose. It's there. The skin color is there.It's there because I needed t for other things, I'm gonna change the skin tones later. (yellow human. HAH.)
4. ITS A CHIBI WHAT DO YOU EXPECT.

oh and im sorry if this seemed rude. i'm rude. xD
I have irl anger issues, im sorreh D:
but thanks, i guess.
FFFFFFFFFF-
SORRY! D:
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:53 pm

oh sorry I read it all just didn't see those sentences under the picture, my bad.

I thought it was a chibi....


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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Fri Jun 17, 2011 4:05 pm

It looks nice! I would love to see the finished version.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Fri Jun 17, 2011 4:06 pm

shugo chara<3
looks great 8D

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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:34 pm

I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:49 pm

Abbey wrote:
I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome

So you're saying she put this up on Fb too or that she copied it? :/
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:04 pm

Mitsuki wrote:
Abbey wrote:
I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome

So you're saying she put this up on Fb too or that she copied it? :/
She put it on Facebook.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:08 pm

Abbey wrote:
Mitsuki wrote:
Abbey wrote:
I SAW THIS ON FACEBOOK
is awesome

So you're saying she put this up on Fb too or that she copied it? :/
She put it on Facebook.

Ohh ok, sorry Razz
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:48 pm

Its beautiful (: I cant even do this!
I'm jealous D:<
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:06 pm

i do not..copy..pshh... xD
here's it so far.


I still gotta edit, shade,& color it some more.
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:34 pm

A wrote:
i do not..copy..pshh... xD
here's it so far.


I still gotta edit, shade,& color it some more.

It looks very pweety!!! Cool Cool not everyone has amazing talents like u!!
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sat Jun 18, 2011 9:47 pm

It all is coming together I like it ^^
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sun Jun 19, 2011 2:56 pm

Thanks ^^(:
I don't have alot of talent.
There are some days where i can draw greatly, and other days were i cant draw at all C:
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sun Jun 19, 2011 3:52 pm

It's coming together nicely!

I see the nose! I guess the skin tone before was just too light for me to see it.

Good job
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sun Jun 19, 2011 6:27 pm

haha yeah, i just needed a bright color on the skin in the start so i could distinguish from the white background
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sun Jun 19, 2011 7:13 pm

A wrote:
Thanks ^^(:
I don't have alot of talent.
There are some days where i can draw greatly, and other days were i cant draw at all C:

I know right? Even if you don't have enough talent hun,All you need is motivation. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:07 pm

I love her eyes!
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Mon Jun 20, 2011 3:55 am

it looks ok i suppose Smile
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PostSubject: Re: le woosh   Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:06 pm

YAY SHUGO CHARA XD
As always your work is perfect x3 It's so cute!
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