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PostSubject: Believe In Your Dreams   Sat Jun 18, 2011 3:57 pm

So I made this. It's not my best, but, I like it. Rate 1-5 and if you know, tell me how I could make it better. Oh and please don't mention that it would be better if the people and animals were bigger because my computer just made them small (IDK why). https://i22.servimg.com/u/f22/15/52/33/29/bolt_111.jpg
The horses are a cut out of the cover of Spirit. (movie) The girl is from Avatar: The Last Airbender, her name is Yue. The deer is from Bambi. The cat's origin is unknown but I got it from tasteofawesome.com (picture sharing website) and I cut it out.
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:34 pm

I see you used a pictute I used for Relora's request.

Anyway, that's good for a beginner.
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sat Jun 18, 2011 7:05 pm

Pretty nice 4 outta 5
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sun Jun 19, 2011 3:50 am

pretty good 3.5 outta 5
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sun Jun 19, 2011 4:04 am

It's interesting, and magical too.

Although the writing could have been... Maybe a bit more detailed. I mean, like swirly style, the type of writing you'd see on a magical or dreamy poster. And the black could also have been more detailed.

They're just things you could work on to make it look more nicer than it is.

But I like it, I'll give it 3.5/5 Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sun Jun 19, 2011 5:43 am

The picture is okay but the thing is, it's not giving the effect that it's supposed to give. It's not....magical. It does not match the theme so as Mitsuki says, you should make the handwriting better. Plain white is definately not good. Be creative! Give it a fantastic effect and make it more and more magical!!
So let's see....I'll give you a 3 on 5. Not bad at all but could use improvement! flower
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sun Jun 19, 2011 10:02 am

Thanks for the tips! Smile I didn't know about Relora's request, I'm sorry. Thanks, I had an old picture program and this is my first one.
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sun Jun 19, 2011 12:23 pm

Forever Forgotten wrote:
So I made this. It's not my best, but, I like it. Rate 1-5 and if you know, tell me how I could make it better. Oh and please don't mention that it would be better if the people and animals were bigger because my computer just made them small (IDK why). https://i22.servimg.com/u/f22/15/52/33/29/bolt_111.jpg
The horses are a cut out of the cover of Spirit. (movie) The girl is from Avatar: The Last Airbender, her name is Yue. The deer is from Bambi. The cat's origin is unknown but I got it from tasteofawesome.com (picture sharing website) and I cut it out.


im srry i clicked that yay >.< how do i get out of it?
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PostSubject: Re: Believe In Your Dreams   Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:09 pm

You could hide the writing better. I could read the words on the Spirit picture, and on the Cat picture. Otherwise, I like it a lot. The font could be a little better though... 3.5/5
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