1) Do you feel like this piece has a rhythm? If not, what would you change to make it feel more natural?
A great rhythm, dear.
2) Favourite lines? Least favourite?
They're all great >w<
3) Was the theme obvious enough, or do you feel as though I could accent it more?
A little more accented would be nice ;)
Overall very nice. ^^
tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥