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Subject: the underwater relationship (read and coment plz) Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:28 am
heres a story im coming up with o.O its about a girl who moves and finds something awesome most likely going to be found im chapter 5 o.O Chapter 1 Her new school
"Ugh" Said Jenna struggling to get past the kids in the lunch room.She had just started a new middle school in Long Beach Virginia because her dad had just changed jobs."I can't stand it here!" She told herself. Then,she remembered what her dad said "Just TRY honey and I know you'll get it."Then his nice smile showed across his face in her mind.Even though she loved her mom her dad moved on faster than anything.He was now in love with this girl named Monica. Jenna hated Monica she knew she just loved him for their money.She acted like she knew what Jenna was going through "Aww baby, I know what you were going through my parents were divorced too." That made her angry! Her mom haden't divorced her dad.She died! Then she started to cry.Right there. In the lunch room. Her new friend Kim said "Jenna whats wrong?" Jenna noticed she was crying."Oh, I'm so sorry I just..." She trailed off."Jenna?"Said Kim"Jen? JENNA!" Jenna snapped out of it."Oh my gosh I'm sorry I just hate my dad's girlfriend she upsets me so much."Said Jenna "It's ok" Kim said with a smile.She always would smile and that was her best quality to Jenna. After eating lunch she had math. Math She told herself. I hate Math She hated everything right now.Especialy Monica that was the worst. When Jenna got home she saw the mail. There was something different about the mail. It was the kind that her dad had to check S for single or M for married.He had M checked. Oh no. Thought Jenna No. Please God no! "Hey kiddo!" Said her dad "Hey, Um..Dad did you check the M on that check?" She asked "Yeah isn't that great? Monica and I are getting married!" Said her dad. Jenna had her mouth dropped open.Then she ran up the steps into her room and cried. The next day at school Kim asked "hey Jen what are you so upset about today? You look a little down." "Just the fact that my dad and Monica are getting married" Said Jenna "NO!" Said Kim "He's marrying the gold digger?" Said Kim. She looked so surprised that you could throw a brick at her and she wouldn't notice."Yeah I'm really mad about it too." Said Jenna "I just wanna get this thing throught and have him notice and divorce her." Jenna said "I would too trust me."Said Kim. They had lunch and talked about it the whole time
Chapter 2 The Wedding
After getting home from school Jenna saw her dad and Monica looking through catalogs. "Oh! I love that one Markie-poo!" Said Monica. "Okay if you insist Monie-poo!" Said her dad. Serioulsy??? thaught Jenna They are at the "Honeymoon" stage already?! Jenna went upstairs and called Kim. "Yeah Kim! They're at the "Honeymoon" stage already it's like, they're doing this on purpose!" Said Jenna. "No way! I can't believe this!! Why would they be so cruel?" Asked Kim. "I have no idea."Jenna said. Then she started to cry. "Jen don't cry your strong! Thats what I love about you. I could never stand up like you can!" Then Jenna just kind of smiled and said. "Thanks Kim, that really helps" Said Jenna "Okay I gotta go I'll text you later okay?" Said Kim. "Okay" Said Jenna then she hung up When Jenna went down stairs her dad told her the news "Jen Monica and I are getting married Saturday." Said Jenna's father. "Really?..." Said Jenna cautiously. "Thats really cool..." She really thought it was a tradgedy."Well I already did my homework at school so you two can go back to acting all love-y and stuff" Said Jenna trying to act funny. Her dad laughed and said "Okay sweetie, we'll try." Then Jenna laughed and went downstairs to the TV room. If I could redo anthing in my life it would be mom dying. Thought Jenna. then Monica wouldn't be here. She picked up her phone and started to text Kim. "hey kim guess what my prnts said?" "wut?" "My dads getting mrried to The Wicked Witch" "WHAT?!" "YUP -.-" "im soooo sorry for u" "its ok but if i keep having to eat her goo like food ima die " "omg" So all through the night they texted and just kept making fun of Monica.
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