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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: bbbad pixel Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:11 pm | |
| it's really bbad but i want critique so tell me what makes it bad or good just do it >:v | |
| | | Pommu-pon Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1597 Join date : 2011-05-09 Age : 25 Location : wwwwww
| Subject: Re: bbbad pixel Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:20 pm | |
| Ok, I like it.. It's better than anything I'd do ^^'
Alright. Well first of all, it's kinda rough. The colours could have been done smoother. Her body shape is kinda awkward.. You should check on that. The eyes.. I'm not sure but something doesn't seem right.
Other than that, it's cool. 3.5/5 o3o | |
| | | Abbey Former Staff
Posts : 1462 Join date : 2010-07-18 Age : 25 Location : IG @the.abbsta
| Subject: Re: bbbad pixel Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:26 pm | |
| It looks awesome! The one thing I would do is when you color, you need to make the colors more dynamic. By dynamic meaning, not all the same hue, each time you pick a darker color, move the slider over a bit. By doing that, you make the colors more vibrant. Even if you're not going for a vibrant feel, selecting the right colors can add to the "faint" or "pale" feel. Like, if you were shading something green, each time you dropped down a shade you'd move the hue over to the right (I think The side where it's bluer and greeneer) If you were shading light blue, almost teal, like what you have, you'd move the slider over towards purpleish blue. | |
| | | Valval Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1994 Join date : 2010-01-26 Location : rainbow road♥
| Subject: Re: bbbad pixel Fri Jul 15, 2011 10:51 am | |
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| | | Katie_Forever Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1687 Join date : 2011-06-30 Age : 25 Location : Lala Land :)
| Subject: Re: bbbad pixel Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:23 pm | |
| thats rlly good. I have no advice to give you cuz i suck at drawing | |
| | | Makkine Moderator
Posts : 2772 Join date : 2010-05-17 Age : 26 Location : Woah
| Subject: Re: bbbad pixel Fri Jul 15, 2011 3:37 pm | |
| Abbey helped you with your colour choice, I'll help you with your actual shading. You're used to traditional shading where it's several lines, or you scribble, or whatever. Here you did the same, and that's not good. You need to outline the place you will shade, then use the bucket tool. It's hard to explain, I'll help you irl. | |
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