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PostSubject: theres some times in life.   Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:48 pm

When you feel like improvising some writing.
Im gonna do that here.
Its one of the parts of one of the best stories I made up.

HERE I GO.


I stared at this world.
"Len-Kun..."
Len turned his face. "Miku-Chan, whats wrong?"
"Len-Kun, this universe you created. Everything in this universe has life. The words im saying right now are part of the word village. Len-Kun... Dont you realize this, that, um.... Len-Kun...."
"In this world I feel lonley. Everything has life here. But that just makes me feel even more alone."
I saw him have a frown.
"I...Miku-Chan. You may leave now."
"No Len-Kun! Whyd you build this!? Why didnt you stay in earth?"
The never pitching darkness surrounded us.
"Well, Miku-Chan. I just. I. I dont know..."
We hugged.
"Come with me Len-Kun...."
He looked shocked.
"Miku-Chan...."

YAAAY
There.

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PostSubject: Re: theres some times in life.   Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:33 pm

Wow!!! Thats amazing
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PostSubject: Re: theres some times in life.   Sat Mar 13, 2010 9:59 am

thank you poke! I try hard making good stories to enjoy. And so far im enjoying making this one in my mind... (I get struck when I try to write it)

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PostSubject: Re: theres some times in life.   Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:01 am

Thats great! I like it a lot!
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PostSubject: Re: theres some times in life.   Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:02 am

Cool story, but you have a lot of stories that i just can't keep up with :/.
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PostSubject: Re: theres some times in life.   Sat Mar 13, 2010 10:04 am

sharpsul99 wrote:
Cool story, but you have a lot of stories that i just can't keep up with :/.

Im not starting this. Its a story in my mind. I have most of it. --
But sharp, If I put all of my stories here, It would begin to be spam XD

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