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Lieah
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PostSubject: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Thu Mar 11, 2010 7:38 pm

Now a word from the author. Hey you guys I'm the official author of this story and I didn't copy this from anywhere. Thank you for loving my story and enjoy chapter four.

Chapter 4

The good thing about the bell in our school when I'm trying to tell Bryan I like him, I don't emberess myself in front of him. Time to go in Miss.Bleche
the so called Choir Master. I still don't know why my parents made me go join choir. Guess what, Bryan was my singing partner. This is so wierd, Bryan is almost every class I have. Amazing and wierd.

"Hey Melody."

"Hi Bryan?"

"Can we go somewhere private?"

"Sure....."

We went to the corner of the music room. Is he going to do what I think he's going to do. He hugged me. Kinda awkard if you think of it.

"Can I ask you something?"

"Yea sure go ahead Melody"

"Well everytime, I try to answer your question the bell always rings."

"Yea I know..."

*Ring*Once again the bell intterupts the conversation. This is amazing every time i speak with him the bell rings. Will I ever tell that I love him?

Chapter 5

School ended early today because it was Friday. I was lucky that the school doesn't give homework on Fridays. I had to take the bus home because my mom and dad were at work. At least my parents have a babysitter to take care of my brother. At the time I got to my room guess who was there? My brother, Michael.

"Michael, get out of my room."

"Melody has a boyfriend! Melody has a boyfriend! Melody has a boyfriend!!!"

"Shut up twerp"

"Make me!!"

"Ahhh!!!!! GET OUT!!!"

"Naomi!!! Melody is being mean to me!!"

"Ugh Shut up Michael!!"

Finally he got out. I locked my door and fixed my hair. I saw the time and it said, 2:54. I got to get ready before the party starts. I started to pick out dresses, shirts, pants, skirts, anything to impress Bryan.

*Buzzz* My phone was still on vibrate. I read my text and it said, See you at 5:00, at 3254 Sunnyside dr. It was a text from Bryan. Ooohh I so happy I'm going to kiss my first love's kiss. I got all ready and prepped up. The time was 4:37. I guess I have to call Melanie to come pick me up. Her mom is driving us. By the time we get there its 4:56. I'm always the earlist person at parties.

I wonder if I'm going to kiss him? I sat down at his family couch and wait for the other guest. Around 5:30, that's when all the people arrived. Even William arrived, err.. Who am I going to kiss? When will it happen?

Chapter 6 *Preview*

http://fantageforum.forumotion.com/creations-f16/new-day-new-love-chapters-1-3-t429.htm chapters 1-3


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PostSubject: Re: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:16 pm

I really love it!
I've read all the chapters.
Its such a cute and sweet story! <3
Can't wait for more!
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But one thing,
sometimes the grammar is off, like it says "got" instead of "get"
and a few words sometimes are spelled wrong
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PostSubject: Re: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:47 pm

This is a great story!
Cant wait for more!

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PostSubject: Re: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:00 am

wow AMAZING! can't wait for more ;0
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PostSubject: Re: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:16 pm

That is amazing! Make more!
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PostSubject: Re: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:31 pm

WOW!! this actually keeps me in suspense xD i luv it!! great job!! can't wait for more! yay! xP <3 keep it up! <3
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PostSubject: Re: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:13 am

Great story! Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: New Day New Love (chapters 4-6)   Sun Mar 14, 2010 9:29 am

Great Story!!!! I LOVE IT!
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