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 | Subject: Savannah Twinkle Star's Adventure to Fantage.  Sun Jul 31, 2011 6:28 am | |
| I am writing a story called Savannah Twinkle Star. It's not a real name in Fantage. Hope you like it! Introduction: - Spoiler:
Hi! My name is Savannah Twinkle Star. I am thirteen years old and I have long blonde hair, sea blue eyes and rosy pink lips. I am a pale girl [ fair, I mean ] and I have many adventures. This is the biggest in my life! It happened to me on one sudden day…….
Chapter 1 - Spoiler:
It was early in the morning. 5:00. Savannah Twinkle Star’s alarm started ringing. She switched it off. “Let me be late for work” she mumbled. “I had such a tiring day yesterday..”
Now Savannah Twinkle Star is an extraordinary girl. Even if she is thirteen, she still goes to work in an office. She dresses mature and like a young lady, and her English is extremely good. She lived in a virtual world called Witchme, In a street called Moonlight. Savannah worried about nothing. She was a fit and confident person. But now she had something to worry about.
She slept for five more minutes in peace, until shouts woke her up.
“Help! Help! Tsunami! Tsunami is here!”
Savannah woke up with a start. Were eight-year olds making a joke? She looked out the window. “No” she said. “It can’t be”
But it was. A large tsunami was rampaging like a bull, and it was taking off all the windows and doors of houses and sweeping people off their feet, leaving them screaming helplessly.
“Oh no!” said Savannah. “Moonlight is no longer a safe place. I have to leave!” Savannah packed all her clothes and all her precious items with every single small thing which could fit into her suitcase. Then, she called her friends, neighbours and especially, her parents. “Mother! Father! There’s a tsunami coming- you’d better get out of your house!” she shrieked on the phone.
“ Yes, we know, we are in a taxi to another world called Fantage.” Said her mother. “You have to come there! Go to the street called grey owl and stay there and make a home and a living” But then her window’s burst and water poured in. She put down her phone and ran off, her suitcase with her. “The taxi parking is too far away” thought Savannah. “ Let me go to the railway station instead.” So Savannah ran and ran, and with luck didn’t black out on the weight of her suitcase.
“Please- take me- to Gray Owl- in Fantage” she puffed. “This way” said a man. “Hurry!” Savannah ran into the train the man pointed to. She sat down in her bunker bead in her compartment.
“I am so lucky nothing bad happened”
She called her mother. Her mother and father answered. “Oh good! We are in Amber Antelope now. You can visit it on holidays. But Gray Owl. Remember that.” Said her mother. Savannah said “yes” and flopped down onto her bed.
Chapter 2 - Spoiler:
Several years later=
Savannah now had made a living, and she lived in a huge tree house in Gray Owl. She visited her mother and father in Amber Antelope daily, and soon, after several years, she had turned 18. Her family wished her and so did her friends, Anne, Cathie, Silverbelle, Sunshine and Shimmer. Though, her enemies Esmeralda and Juliet just guffawed at her. “Hey Savannah” said Juliet. “Lets celebrate this day when you become inches shorter!”
“And, let’s celebrate me becoming 18 and I’m taller than you when you’re 20” This was actually true, as Savannah was quite fit and strong- she was tall as well, though extremely thin. “So Fatty” said Shimmer to Juliet. “You’re just a sad, bad little kid” This shoed away Juliet immedietly. “You just wait” said Esmeralda. “Soon we’ll get even”
“ And that would be when I’m 61” said Savannah. They laughed and continued their loud game of Snap. “ I’m enjoying your birthday” said Shimmer, with sparkling blue eyes and almond brown hair. “Are you?” asked Cathie, with brown eyes and jet-black hair. “If you are, then Happy birthday!” said Anne, Silverbelle and Sunshine together. They were triplets. All of them had blinding, bright red hair, black, beady eyes and rosy red lips. They all must have rehearsed these lines for me Thought Savannah, pleased. How good if them!
Savannah’s birthday went smoothly. All of them burst firecrackers and where happily showing off their outfits Savannah had lent them for her birthday. They all thoroughly enjoyed themselves, and in the afternoon, decided they were going to have a sleepover. In the night they finished shopping for clothes, and they started talking about the wonderful birthday party. “Hey Savan, we’re going to that scary house in the castle! Wanna come?” asked Shimmer. “Are you sure?” said Savannah. “Of course we are! I mean…. My friend Lenny has gone there and she said it was smashing.” Said Cathie. “That’s because Cathie is brave and strong which is the exact opposite of me.” Replied Savannah.
“Anyways, lets go!”
Meanwhile, Juliet and Esmeralda were listening. They both had mean, grey colored eyes with Golden-red hair which stood out and made them look pretty, [ to attract any boy in Fantage ] But inside they were jealous of people who were popular, mean and arrogant and only cared about themselves. “ Let’s go to that scary house, dress up as ghosts and scare them!” said Esmeralda, her eyes shining. “ We could have a good laugh for weeks and besides, we could tell it to our whole office!”
“Good idea” said Juliet, nastily. “Lets get our costumes from last Halloween- the ghost ones, you know them, don’t you?
“Yes! The plan is absolutely foolproof!” said Esmeralda.
And the two ran away, chuckling silently.
Chapter 3 - Spoiler:
“Are you ready, Juliet?” asked Esmeralda. “No, I’m still stuck with the zip of my jeans” was Juliet’s exasperated reply. “ Well, do it quick already! Those people are leaving Savannah’s house at eight!
“I’m done” said Juliet. “Hope we’ve got everything?”
“Yes- cell phones, car keys, purses, costumes, changing clothes, that scary video which imitates ghosts, and scary sounds.” Said Esmeralda, emptying out her pockets. “Lets go” they both got into their car and drove off to the castle. Now- we need to buy tickets for the scary house. They’ve not come yet, thankfully!” she said, after they reached. They both the tickets and went off into the changing rooms again. They changed and ran into the scary house.
Savannah, Cathie, Silver-belle, Sunshine and Shimmer went into the scary house
But did not know what awaited them. However, Anne was quiet and timid and did not enter the scary house. So they all shrugged and went into the house. It was creepy. Everyone felt uneasy. For a few moments they did not speak and then came an earsplitting crash.
“AAAAAAAH!!!!”
“What was that?”
“I don’t know!”
“Wait a minute- That was Anne’s voice!” shouted Savannah in all the screams.
“AAAAAAAAAAAH!”
“AAAAAAAAAAAAH!”
Then came two more screeches.
“That was Juliet and Esmeralda!”
They all ran closer to the voices. Anne- their friend- what was wrong? Could she have been kidnapped? What about Juliet and Esmeralda?
“This way!” cried Savannah, listening to the shrieks.
They ran zig-zag and criss-cross but never managed to find Anne in the enormous haunted house. All of them finally stopped and flopped down, gasping and panting like dogs in a desert.
“I-Can’t-Go-Any-Further” said Silver-Belle and just collapsed.
Savannah looked around. Her face was pale. Nobody would actually scream so loudly in a haunted house- and why did Juliet and Esmeralda scream too? But why were Juliet and Esmeralda there? Thought Savannah. Five minutes had passed- and they still hadn’t found Anne. So Savannah crept along the passage. But the other girls weren’t listening to that.
“Silver-Belle? SILVER-BELLE! WAKE UP!”
Silver-Belle woke up with a shriek.
“I-I could here voices-voices in my head!”
“You’re holy, girl!”
“Wait a darned minute!” said Savannah. “Are my ears deceiving me? Do I hear voices?”
And so she had.
From behind the wall, they could hear Juliet and Esmeralda smothered with shrieks of laughter.
Chapter 4 - Spoiler:
“HEY!”
Savannah, Silver-belle, Cathie, Sunshine and Shimmer ran into the cave with echoes of laughter bouncing off the walls. They saw Anne, now as red as her hair. It looked like she was boiling with anger, but Anne was just so timid, the red in her face just meant she was embarrassed.
“HAHA!” Juliet and Esmeralda hollered. “What a stupid friend you have! Just poor!”
“YOU SHUDDUP, JUDIED!”
Suddenly the laughing stopped. They saw Anne. Her nose was bleeding! And when Anne got angry, her nose bled. And when Anne got angry, it was not a good sign.
With a cry of fury, Anne charged towards Esmeralda and Juliet, and smashed them both in the face. She punched them in the eye. She even tried to throw a rock smack into their mouth when Savannah pulled her back and dabbed her nose with a wet cloth.
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It was noon. Anne’s nosebleed had stopped, but she had a black eye where Esmeralda had punched her. Her face was still boiling red, but she was still the same old timid Anne.
“It’s alright, Anne, it’s all over! I would’ve punched them too, if I were you!” said Shimmer, her blue eyes shining.
“You tackled them single-handedly!” said Savannah.
“It’s alright! They deserved it!”
But whatever they said did not calm down Anne- and the worst thing that could happen was Anne apologizing to them.
Something really strange happened that night.
All of the girls were sleeping in Savannah’s house. Anne was tired but yet, could not get sleep. Shimmer had forced her to stay where she was and Savannah had refused to let her move. This was Anne’s chance.
She was thirsty. Anne crept out of bed without a noise and into the kitchen. She drank a lot of water. Then, still in her pajamas, she ran away!
Anne never did this.
She went to Juliet and Esmeralda’s house. They both lived together. She knocked on the door. After what seemed like half a second, the door opened.
Esmeralda looked wide awake.
“I just came to say sorry!” said Anne, before she could speak.
Esmeralda looked blank.
“Well-join our side” she said slyly. “We’re much better than those people”
“Why?”
“Because they didn’t look after you, did they?”
“They did.”
“Well, they forced you, didn’t they?”
At this, Anne looked blank.
“And we are much better. Come inside! Our house is solo! We have a large screen TV and anything you could dream of!’
And the bad thing that happened next was-
“Yes”
This is a story about wisdom, kind-hearted people and the way you should be brave and believe in yourself! | |
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