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+8alex Relora sahilin taehyung el Blackrose xXlexiXx jester43 12 posters |
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jester43 New Fantagian
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-07-09 Age : 26 Location : Queens ,New York
| Subject: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:10 pm | |
| One Day a man's car broke down so he called the RAA. They told him that it would take 3 days. So he Decided to go to the motel down the road. The person at the hotel gave him his keys and warned him never to go out of his room at 12:00 midnight so he took his bags and went up to his room, forgeting to ask why. So he went to sleep at 12:00 but he heard a noise coming from outside, he looked through the keyhole and saw a little girl wearing white skipping down the corridor, so he was about to go outside and tell her to go to her room. Then he remembered what the man at the lobby said. So he went to sleep. The Next day it was midnight when he was about to go to sleep and the same girl was there skipping down the corridor, but he didn't do anything and went to sleep. The Next day when it was midnight he was getting ready to go to sleep, but he went to look through his key hole again but all he could see was red. As he was about to leave the hotel next morning, he asked the man at the lobby why did u say not to go out of your room at midnight, and so the man told him, there once was a girl who died in the corridor and everyday she skips down the corridor at exactly 12:00 midnight as a ghost. She's white, and has red eyes. As the man was leaving the hotel he realised something, when he could only see red on the third day, as he was looking at her, she was LOOKING AT HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |
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xXlexiXx Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1588 Join date : 2011-01-27 Age : 105 Location : byeeeeeeee
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:14 pm | |
| that made me think never go to a motel | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:30 pm | |
| What is a corridor? o---e |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:33 pm | |
| ...I think I will never go to a Motel in the middle of nowehere now...XD | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:35 pm | |
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taehyung Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 23 Location : somewhere
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:36 pm | |
| Now im scared! i can't SLEEP!!! | |
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sahilin Senior Fantagian
Posts : 356 Join date : 2010-11-01 Location : Good Question.
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:50 pm | |
| - Finn wrote:
- What is a corridor? o---e
Hallway | |
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sahilin Senior Fantagian
Posts : 356 Join date : 2010-11-01 Location : Good Question.
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:52 pm | |
| Now that's SCARY. But what I don't get is how could he was looking at her she was looking at him??? I don't get it! | |
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| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:53 pm | |
| - sahilin wrote:
- Finn wrote:
- What is a corridor? o---e
Hallway Oh, thank you :3 |
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sahilin Senior Fantagian
Posts : 356 Join date : 2010-11-01 Location : Good Question.
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:55 pm | |
| - Finn wrote:
- sahilin wrote:
- Finn wrote:
- What is a corridor? o---e
Hallway Oh, thank you :3 Your welcome :] and do you get the part of how he was looking at her but she was looking at him at the end????? | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 5:59 pm | |
| o o my friend told me a story like this but it took place in India.... and it was a hospital.. | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:03 pm | |
| Right in the paragraph where it said "she has red eyes" I was like OH SNAP she was stalking him...... Okay but seriously it was quite good. | |
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| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:04 pm | |
| - sahilin wrote:
- Finn wrote:
- sahilin wrote:
- Finn wrote:
- What is a corridor? o---e
Hallway Oh, thank you :3 Your welcome :] and do you get the part of how he was looking at her but she was looking at him at the end????? Yeah When the story said, "all he saw was red" That was her eyes. But he didnt notice it. At the end he was thinking of it and he finally noticed that she was looking at him. They were looking at eachother |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:10 pm | |
| Okay I rethought this....
So this random guy sees this girl one night and every night after that, when he wakes up at 12:00 he immediately goes and looks..... Is anyone else thinking stalker...... | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:11 pm | |
| LOLOLOL @Relora.
Agreed. No comment ;] |
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xXlexiXx Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1588 Join date : 2011-01-27 Age : 105 Location : byeeeeeeee
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:12 pm | |
| @Relora i thought the same thing xDDD | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Wed Aug 03, 2011 6:13 pm | |
| 7/10
I don't like your choice of words very much. I'm not really feeling like I'm "in the story".
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jester43 New Fantagian
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-07-09 Age : 26 Location : Queens ,New York
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Thu Aug 04, 2011 9:32 am | |
| HAHHAHA GUYS THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Thu Aug 04, 2011 9:34 am | |
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Angus Bethune Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1889 Join date : 2010-02-02 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Thu Aug 04, 2011 9:38 am | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Thu Aug 04, 2011 9:39 am | |
| @Xaria ikr (hurhur text talk cause I'm lazy) | |
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pat Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4245 Join date : 2010-12-29 Age : 22 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Thu Aug 04, 2011 9:48 am | |
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feather_cookie New Fantagian
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koby New Fantagian
Posts : 17 Join date : 2011-08-06 Age : 26 Location : where ever Rosered is
| Subject: Re: Another Scary Storie By Jester43 Sun Aug 07, 2011 5:49 pm | |
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