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PostSubject: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:56 pm




Thanks >:3

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tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:59 pm

9/10 Is it your first time? It's really good. : ]
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:01 pm

uh 8/10?
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:08 pm

8/10 Pretty good Pose is nice :3
Awesome shading, and the hair shine is something good to add too :]
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:10 pm

Yup, first time.

Thank you. Anyway I can improve? e_

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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:12 pm

um the outline of the body MAY be a little too thick maybe make it a little thinner?
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:16 pm

The outline of the body is a bit too thick. But thats a really nothin'. You can work on wrinkles in the clothes. You know, in anime they shade it like that? xDD The eyes are pretty good, but you should add white dots to make them shine, and let you the direction she is looking.

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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:20 pm

maybe outline the hair as well Wink but those r your choices
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:37 am

From what I've seem her say, this girl isn't here to hear only praise.
So,
The eye isn't very pretty. It looks awkward, and not detalled enough. Plus, it doesn't fit the rest of the style. The hair has no shading whatsoever expect for the shine, which isn't very well done and kind of creases. The anatomy is quite good but falls a bit flat, the sleeve before the hand looks attached. Not part of her body.
Also, one part of her hair seems chipped, it's touching the hair, you might want to fix that part.

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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:45 am

Well thats kinda rude , dude. Its her first time e_e
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:10 am

wow! first time? PRETTAYY GOOD! : D
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 2:43 am

wow awesome for first time!
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:29 am

Pretty EPIC!!!!! Very Happy 1,000/10 Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 11:32 am

8/10 not bad for the first time Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:00 pm

7/10
Needs some practice : P
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:08 pm

ehhh...8.5/10 there could be some hair at the other side of the head its geood other than that ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:12 pm

@Peace her Hair is supposed to be put to one side.....


8/10 I like it ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:20 pm

9/10 really good for first time Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Thu Aug 04, 2011 12:28 pm

Finn wrote:
Well thats kinda rude , dude. Its her first time e_e

We can't all be here to be nice you know... If I critique I would have said close to the same thing and given a lower rating.. but I don't critique..... It wasn't rude it was correct....
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PostSubject: Re: Rate this NAO. [:    Tue Aug 09, 2011 7:01 pm

No offfense but I think its not so good if it was hand drawn, which I dont think it was. On the other hand, drawing like that on the computer is pretty good.
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